Pressure Induced Rant

I'm more than half way to the gates
or so the statistics fancy to say.
Seen a lot but need to see a lot more
haven't suffered or laughed enough
need a few more scuffs and scars
need to grow up but I'm trending down
need to hide pain and struggle gracefully
strengthen the weaknesses-maintain the strengths.
Though I don't have enough mental mortar.
need to toss these streaks of jealousy in the pit
need to pare down that gigantic bucket list
reach a couple of goals-go for one last blitz.
but I'm running low on energy and time
where are those auxiliary tanks of fuel and time
I need to pray more?
have I done enough for family-friends
need to pray more
have I done enough for god
need to be more humble
have I done enough for myself.
I've got to do more for others
to help them reach their goals
but what about mine
i'm running low on fuel and time
I've got to stop whining.
be a man-struggle in silence
The universe is 14 billion years old
I have to iron all this mess out 
in 73 years or so. 
That's a lot to ask of a man
who's having short term memory lapses
I need to pray for others more-and mean it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/31/2019 10:32:00 PM
Hi, Anthony! I welcome each line of this soul searching work. It's obvious you think deeply and take us with you... I don't think it's your end days at all. In fact, wish more people in this world asked such questions.Cell phones can't compare to you, Anthony. Panagiota
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:04:00 PM
The last four lines had me smiling from ear to ear.
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