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Preserving the Bond

Love can bring pleasure and joy passion sheer paradise until one bad act ill-spoken or done hits Eden. Oh Boy! the true test of strong love its beauty and worth is how well two forgive two preserving the bond. 8/9/19 Yalto Form Yalto poems only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/10/2019 11:12:00 PM

Just superb! Really enjoyed your Yalto, Janis:-) Good luck in the contest!

Janis Thompson
Date: 9/11/2019 8:58:00 AM

Thanks Edward. I know now I am on the right track with it. Interesting invention, you are to be commended.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/8/2019 8:26:00 PM

So that's the form! Your words are beauty spoken from the podium of spiritual poetry. They are profound and wise; I really like your lovely poem. All the best ... CayCay

Janis Thompson
Date: 9/9/2019 10:53:00 AM

Thanks CayCay. Your words are extremely encouraging and I enjoyed composing for this interesting form from Ibeh.