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Presence of Fall

Red Holly berries decorate the Holly shrub; contrast waxy deep green leaves, buds pop 'pon the Tulip Tree amassed. The Camellia Sasanqua's white blossoms show just below the last few golden pears of gold_ Better work than Van Gogh Possibly unfinished__

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/15/2012 3:02:00 PM
Lots of color in this sweet poem of fall. Loved the last line.
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Date: 11/15/2012 11:08:00 AM
This is such a brilliant write, maybe unfinished true, but still done very eloquently! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and perfected poem this afternoon! What a special and wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/15/2012 8:38:00 AM
Love the natural melange that you have artfully sculpted. You have glossed the holiday with a gilded veil.
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