Prepared Fish

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The 
God
One True
God, God of
Heaven and Earth made
And prepared a great fish to eat
Swallow Jonah whole, undigested..sick..fish threw-up
Jonah on the shore bleached white stinking to high heaven, ran preached three days 
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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 19, 2010 at 3:23 AM
Sara, That had to be a terrifying experience! Do you think that scene in Pinocchio was inspired by the Bible? Smiles. Nice write. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Palli Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Very clever! I sent you soup mail again.
Culverhouse Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 7:42 AM
nicely penned--The translator for the cockney slang i just happened on it and thought I would share my find.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 11:55 AM
A wonderful Bible story to reflect upon Sara and how God never leaves us nor forsakes us.. even Jonah who ran away.. a great form of poetry used also.. enjoyed these precious words....luv.. Linda-Marie..
Brown Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us I enjoyed reading it today. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Sara. Love, Carol
Esquire Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Dear Sara, After reading this and several more of YOUR Fibonacci 's I do believe I am going to try this Form Thank-YOU for YOUR Wisdom in this form LOVE YOU and YOURS ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG SOUP MAIL CALL ( In 5 Minutes)
Sokolowski Avatar
February 26, 2010 at 5:42 AM
nice poetry
Moreno Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 10:54 PM
Nice work Sara, loved the twist...Raul
La France Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 4:25 PM
Interesting form.. and wonderful write.. and thanks for you comment on my poetry... Constance
Owens Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Very Nice and funny...love this form Sara...Marty
Dietrich Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 12:41 PM
sara, do you know this comes up twice. I wonder how it posted that way! I think it is the same poem twice. LUv, andrea
Hill Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 12:40 PM
:))) TAH
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