Premeditated

I lay and ponder all night on things you have sought, like seeking all the darkness wanting to get caught, your mania and depression made you distraught. Your suicide was definitely aforethought, and now your labeled the woman who never fought. With all the goodness in the world you could have brought, but you chose to perish without a single thought. Your premediated careless death was so wrought, a terrible and unnecessary onslaught. No jewelry or monuments could have been bought, to make you stay, for you were filled with so much fraught, I think about all the goodness you could have taught. 12 X 12 Monorhyme Contest January 12, 2017

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Date: 1/30/2017 11:34:00 AM
Cannot any more than what was said below. Congratulations on your win! :-)
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Date: 1/28/2017 7:58:00 PM
a very sad one, Laura. And I know it is meaningful to you as well. Congrats on the winner list. Glad I am finally seeing this one.
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Date: 1/28/2017 6:37:00 PM
Sad, Laura, but well-constructed monorhyme. Congratulations on a fine piece; the win is just icing on the cake. We never know when a bit of encouragement will help a person through the trying times and change the desire to end it all.
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Date: 1/28/2017 11:10:00 AM
Sad but well done, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 1/28/2017 9:13:00 AM
I am touched. Congrats Laura to win
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Date: 1/27/2017 8:22:00 PM
*Tear* well done luloo!! Big congratulations on your win!! Hugggs and love. :) deb
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Date: 1/18/2017 8:07:00 AM
A lovely write, Laura:)
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Date: 1/12/2017 11:10:00 AM
Nicely penned, Laura - Impressed! My very best regards - Cheers! :) john P.s A much deserved seven.
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Date: 1/12/2017 11:07:00 AM
I really feel for this, being someone who's struggling with depression. Keep up the good work :)
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