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Prematurely

Outside the rain-splattered window winds whipped tearing still-moist leaves from their moorings hurled to the ground dying, like our love prematurely without a proper goodbye

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Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 11/24/2019 6:55:00 PM

Sad words, the imagery brings them to life. So well written Gershon.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/16/2019 2:50:00 PM

Hello Fershon wolf, I like this very sad poem.Have a nice day my friend.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/16/2019 8:12:00 PM

Happy to see your comment, Darlene! Cheers, Gershon

Quoth Theraven

Date: 10/27/2019 9:53:00 AM

Gershon, I like this poem and it's regretful message. I hate saying Good-byes. The German phrase may be better suited, 'auf wiedersehen'. -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/27/2019 10:12:00 AM

I agree, Richard. -- Until we meet again, or some such, is much better than 'Good-bye.' As in Russian, do cvidanya, and Hebrew's l'hitra-ot,' both meaning 'until we see each other again.' Smiles, Gershon

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/26/2019 11:54:00 PM

it's raining here too....i could really see this scene...vivid images... that ending powerful....excellent write my friend... hugs

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/27/2019 9:25:00 AM

Appreciate the kind words for this bit of imagism, Sandra. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/26/2019 11:43:00 PM

Dying prematurely - how tragic, so sadly lovely-

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/27/2019 9:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, Michelle, for letting me know how you viewed this write. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/26/2019 10:00:00 PM

Cowabunga dude, spectacular poem. A poetic musing perfectly crafted IMHO. A fave. xomo

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2019 10:45:00 PM

'Cowabunga!' Wow! Haven't heard that one in a while. Thank you so, so much, my dear friend. Smiles! :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/26/2019 9:38:00 PM

Stunning to the max! Panagiota

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/26/2019 10:43:00 PM

A thrill for me to read your enthusiastic comment, my dear friend. Thank you so much! Cheers! :)