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I was sleeping and right in the middle of a good dream
Like all at once I wake up from something that keeps knocking at my brain
Before I go insane I hold my pillow to my head
And spring up in my bed screaming out the words I dread
I think I love you (I think I love you)

Lyrics from I Think I Love You (The Partridge Family)

over and over again
with premature penmanship
i write your name, right next to mine
they share a pillow before i do

my first and maiden name
your first and our last name

my first, your last

Mr. And Mrs.

O the cursive kisses

before we met, there was a psychedelic bus
adventures of a long-haired voice
though not my idol choice
still the romance with his superb notes
he passed them to me
i ate up the heartbeats, ooh Bandala—
he’s coming for me, and i hold
that pillow to my brain
i think he loves me

i think he loves me
i wear his wedding band
their bands of gold
with leaves

i leave behind a fantasy
to fantasize my life
with thee

2/13/2022

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 2/19/2022 5:30:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem Kim."i write your name, right next to mine they share a pillow before i do". Enjoyed the mischievous tone of these lines. Very cute.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/19/2022 6:11:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 2/17/2022 1:42:00 PM
This is gorgeous Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2022 2:07:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/14/2022 10:58:00 PM
Such a sweet love poem to read on Valentine's Day about putting the teen heartthrob in the rear view mirror and focusing fully on true love. I liked the wedding "band" reference too. Beautiful, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2022 3:41:00 AM
Thank you, John! HVD! <3
Date: 2/14/2022 9:15:00 AM
A FaV for this poet. It is unusual and so touching! Thanks. Love, Pangie Simple English but powerful, Kim One of the most unusual poems in two years! Pangie.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2022 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Dahling! HVD
Date: 2/14/2022 1:39:00 AM
Love lost is always terrible. Lovely poem Kim. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2022 4:27:00 AM
At the end I marry the one I love. Hugs, dear one!
Date: 2/13/2022 8:16:00 PM
Utterly fascinating (to me, anyway), Kim. Here's to your amazing past, and HVD! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2022 4:26:00 AM
HVD to you too, dear friend! Thank you :)
Date: 2/13/2022 1:27:00 PM
Good song, moving poem, let's say a prayer for David. Robert
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2022 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Robert!

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