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Premature Aging

pReMaTuRe AgInG
an older woman and a younger man
are a trix in between
because as his love blooms
he sees himself aging.
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penned on august 31, 2014!

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

January 7, 2017 at 10:19 AM

A very insightful poem, Verlena. Much wisdom imparted to us. Ty for sharing this gem of a poem. Love and peace to you.

Roy Jerden

September 17, 2014 at 12:23 PM

Congratulations, Verlena!

John Lawless

September 16, 2014 at 9:56 PM

intriguing chastushka Verlena

Verlena S. Walker

September 16, 2014 at 9:59 PM

Thanks John... Verlena

Carolyn Devonshire

September 16, 2014 at 2:24 PM

Dear Verlena, the message in your poem is very wise, insightful. Love the depth in this brief verse. Congratulations!

Verlena S. Walker

September 16, 2014 at 3:07 PM

Thanks Carolyn for your awesome response. Verlena

Jan Allison

September 16, 2014 at 11:31 AM

many congrats on your win Verlena Hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker

September 16, 2014 at 11:33 AM

Thanks Jan. Verlena

Paul Callus

September 16, 2014 at 9:04 AM

Congrats on your win, Verlena. Enjoyed the contents...also took into account the comments made both by you and Dr Ram!:) // paul

Verlena S. Walker

September 16, 2014 at 10:09 AM

Thanks Paul. I have teach Dr. Ram about verses and flow. LOL Sending a smile, Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans

September 16, 2014 at 8:15 AM

Congratulations on your win Verlena

Verlena S. Walker

September 16, 2014 at 8:39 AM

Thanks for the Congratulations Brenda... Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 16, 2014 at 6:41 AM

It's perfect write with satire and wit , yet humor on cougar effect. But the rhyming is poor. You could have been placed much higher but of the rhyming, Verlena

Verlena S. Walker

September 16, 2014 at 7:30 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram. It flows. I never rhyme poor Dr. Ram. This is written this way intentionally. Verlena