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Premature Aging

pReMaTuRe AgInG
an older woman and a younger man
are a trix in between
because as his love blooms
he sees himself aging.
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penned on august 31, 2014!

Copyright © Verlena S. Walker | Year Posted 2014

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 1/7/2017 10:19:00 AM A very insightful poem, Verlena. Much wisdom imparted to us. Ty for sharing this gem of a poem. Love and peace to you. Login to Reply

Roy Jerden Date: 9/17/2014 12:23:00 PM Congratulations, Verlena! Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 9/16/2014 9:56:00 PM intriguing chastushka Verlena Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/16/2014 9:59:00 PM Thanks John... Verlena

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/16/2014 2:24:00 PM Dear Verlena, the message in your poem is very wise, insightful. Love the depth in this brief verse. Congratulations! Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/16/2014 3:07:00 PM Thanks Carolyn for your awesome response. Verlena

Jan Allison Date: 9/16/2014 11:31:00 AM many congrats on your win Verlena Hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/16/2014 11:33:00 AM Thanks Jan. Verlena

Paul Callus Date: 9/16/2014 9:04:00 AM Congrats on your win, Verlena. Enjoyed the contents...also took into account the comments made both by you and Dr Ram!:) // paul Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/16/2014 10:09:00 AM Thanks Paul. I have teach Dr. Ram about verses and flow. LOL Sending a smile, Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 9/16/2014 8:15:00 AM Congratulations on your win Verlena Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/16/2014 8:39:00 AM Thanks for the Congratulations Brenda... Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/16/2014 6:41:00 AM It's perfect write with satire and wit , yet humor on cougar effect. But the rhyming is poor. You could have been placed much higher but of the rhyming, Verlena Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/16/2014 7:30:00 AM Thanks Dr. Ram. It flows. I never rhyme poor Dr. Ram. This is written this way intentionally. Verlena

Keith Baucum Date: 9/5/2014 1:57:00 PM Great poem Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 9/5/2014 4:15:00 PM Thanks Keith for your awesome response. Verlena

Deb Wilson Date: 8/31/2014 7:02:00 PM sounds like my man and me !I liked this very much...love, Deb Login to Reply Verlena S. Walker Date: 8/31/2014 7:12:00 PM Thanks Deb for your superlative response. Verlena