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Premature Aging

pReMaTuRe AgInG an older woman and a younger man are a trix in between because as his love blooms he sees himself aging. _________________________| penned on august 31, 2014!

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/7/2017 10:19:00 AM

A very insightful poem, Verlena. Much wisdom imparted to us. Ty for sharing this gem of a poem. Love and peace to you.

Roy Jerden

Date: 9/17/2014 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations, Verlena!

John Lawless

Date: 9/16/2014 9:56:00 PM

intriguing chastushka Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 9:59:00 PM

Thanks John... Verlena

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2014 2:24:00 PM

Dear Verlena, the message in your poem is very wise, insightful. Love the depth in this brief verse. Congratulations!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 3:07:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn for your awesome response. Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 9/16/2014 11:31:00 AM

many congrats on your win Verlena Hugs Jan xx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 11:33:00 AM

Thanks Jan. Verlena

Paul Callus

Date: 9/16/2014 9:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Verlena. Enjoyed the contents...also took into account the comments made both by you and Dr Ram!:) // paul

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 10:09:00 AM

Thanks Paul. I have teach Dr. Ram about verses and flow. LOL Sending a smile, Verlena

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/16/2014 8:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 8:39:00 AM

Thanks for the Congratulations Brenda... Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/16/2014 6:41:00 AM

It's perfect write with satire and wit , yet humor on cougar effect. But the rhyming is poor. You could have been placed much higher but of the rhyming, Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 7:30:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Ram. It flows. I never rhyme poor Dr. Ram. This is written this way intentionally. Verlena

Keith Baucum

Date: 9/5/2014 1:57:00 PM

Great poem

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/5/2014 4:15:00 PM

Thanks Keith for your awesome response. Verlena

Deb Wilson

Date: 8/31/2014 7:02:00 PM

sounds like my man and me !I liked this very much...love, Deb

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/31/2014 7:12:00 PM

Thanks Deb for your superlative response. Verlena