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PrEmAtUrE aGiNg

pReMaTuRe AgInG
an older woman and a younger man are a trix in between because as his love blooms he sees himself aging. _________________________|
penned on august 31, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/7/2017 10:19:00 AM
A very insightful poem, Verlena. Much wisdom imparted to us. Ty for sharing this gem of a poem. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 9/17/2014 12:23:00 PM
Congratulations, Verlena!
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Date: 9/16/2014 9:56:00 PM
intriguing chastushka Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 9:59:00 PM
Thanks John... Verlena
Date: 9/16/2014 2:24:00 PM
Dear Verlena, the message in your poem is very wise, insightful. Love the depth in this brief verse. Congratulations!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn for your awesome response. Verlena
Date: 9/16/2014 11:31:00 AM
many congrats on your win Verlena Hugs Jan xx
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Jan. Verlena
Date: 9/16/2014 9:04:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Verlena. Enjoyed the contents...also took into account the comments made both by you and Dr Ram!:) // paul
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thanks Paul. I have teach Dr. Ram about verses and flow. LOL Sending a smile, Verlena
Date: 9/16/2014 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 8:39:00 AM
Thanks for the Congratulations Brenda... Verlena
Date: 9/16/2014 6:41:00 AM
It's perfect write with satire and wit , yet humor on cougar effect. But the rhyming is poor. You could have been placed much higher but of the rhyming, Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/16/2014 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram. It flows. I never rhyme poor Dr. Ram. This is written this way intentionally. Verlena
Date: 9/5/2014 1:57:00 PM
Great poem
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 9/5/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thanks Keith for your awesome response. Verlena
Date: 8/31/2014 8:37:00 PM
Verbena, nicely written write!
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/31/2014 8:42:00 PM
Thanks Dave for your supportive remarks. Verlena
Date: 8/31/2014 7:02:00 PM
sounds like my man and me !I liked this very much...love, Deb
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/31/2014 7:12:00 PM
Thanks Deb for your superlative response. Verlena