Raul Moreno Poet Romanticism

Preludes

I believe we had more fun,
When I used to sit and wait.
For you to sneak out again,
For a nightly moonlit date.

Those were the good old days,
That my heart happily longs for.
The summer days at the ocean,
Slowly kissing by the shore.

Now that we’re fully grown,
You still give my eye a twinkle.
Marriage is good but can’t compare,
To the preludes of love and wrinkles.

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Elizabeth Neal December 6, 2008 at 4:01 PM This is a nice poem, I love the way you narrowed it down to the preludes. Love Elizabeth

Constance La France December 6, 2008 at 2:31 PM a great poem... brought back some nice memories... of parking, sitting close together... walking on the shore hand in hand... nice... thank you for your comment on my poem.. Grannie Angel...yes Raul.. she was a great lady... the reason I write... write it, constance, write down your thoughts and dreams for the world to read... Constance

Daniel Neal December 6, 2008 at 6:57 AM Nice poem, like the last stanza. It says a lot of truth. DN

John Rhinem December 5, 2008 at 7:25 PM Yes, well be of good cheer dear Brother~For before you know it~Within the twinkling of An Eye~You and your lifes love~Will be forever young again~For actually, it is only this life, that is a prelude unto it all!:) "Hello My Dear Friend Raul~'Beautifully expressed and penned write here dear Brother~"Truly!"~"Love Always Unto Your Loves, John!":)

Derrick Burton December 5, 2008 at 5:19 PM growing old together sounds good if you love the one your with, great poem and really liked it alot.

Robin L. Gass December 5, 2008 at 3:39 PM There is something about being young and newly in love. This is such a light hearted and beatifully written poem that will bring wonderful memories to those who read it. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Love Robin

Michael Torres December 5, 2008 at 12:58 PM Funny Raul I loved this very clever Love you my christian brother I hope al is well with you and family Michael

Carrie Richards December 5, 2008 at 6:13 AM I love that last line! Delightful little poem, filled with lovely truths...the early days of courtship...Ahhh. ~Carrie

Sharon Winter December 5, 2008 at 5:12 AM Very cute, and ah so true. But such is life as the cycle continues, and we must count our blessings we ever knew those good old days, and for what we have now. Love, Shar