Prelude

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playful the mood their tantalizing whispers its dance shimmering across an onyx sky feverishly climbs the lush strawberry moon supernal aura of its charm lingering like the trail of an alluring perfume as tempting as any mermaid’s chant on the loneliest of blue midnights hearts beat of twin lovers in harmony, longing their outreach intertwined to rendezvous AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on September 24, 2021 for "P" CONTEST sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 3RD

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/5/2021 12:40:00 PM

So lovely and so colorful in its pensive allure Line. Congratulations for your win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2021 8:30:00 PM

Most appreciated, thank you, Sam ~

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2021 8:48:00 AM

Line, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this wonderfully penned poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/5/2021 12:11:00 PM

Thank you so much for my win and your lovely comment, Constance. Most appreciated ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2021 5:40:00 PM

a beautiful gem here, Line. congrats, dear.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/28/2021 5:43:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea ~ much appreciated

Jan Allison

Date: 9/27/2021 2:28:00 PM

How beautiful and romantic is this Line I especially love "Supernal aura of its charm lingering Like the trail of an alluring perfume" many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/28/2021 4:42:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jan ~

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/27/2021 2:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write and picture. I love this one. The full moon is the best time of the month. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/28/2021 4:43:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Paula ~