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Prelude

playful the mood their tantalizing whispers

its dance shimmering across an onyx sky
feverishly climbs the lush strawberry moon

supernal aura of its charm lingering
like the trail of an alluring perfume
as tempting as any mermaid’s chant
on the loneliest of blue midnights

hearts beat of twin lovers in harmony, longing
their outreach intertwined to rendezvous



AP: 2nd place 2022

Submitted on September 24, 2021 for "P" CONTEST sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE  -  RANKED 3RD
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Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 12:40 PM
So lovely and so colorful in its pensive allure Line. Congratulations for your win.
Gauthier Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Most appreciated, thank you, Sam ~
La France Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 8:48 AM
Line, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this wonderfully penned poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Gauthier Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 12:11 PM
Thank you so much for my win and your lovely comment, Constance. Most appreciated ~
Dietrich Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 5:40 PM
a beautiful gem here, Line. congrats, dear.
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 5:43 PM
Thanks, Andrea ~ much appreciated
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 2:28 PM
How beautiful and romantic is this Line I especially love "Supernal aura of its charm lingering Like the trail of an alluring perfume" many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 4:42 PM
Thank you very much, Jan ~
Goldsmith Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 2:26 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely story/write and picture. I love this one. The full moon is the best time of the month. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Gauthier Avatar
September 28, 2021 at 4:43 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Paula ~
Skelly Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 2:01 AM
Captivating...Delice
Gauthier Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 7:11 AM
Thank you , Delice ~
Strand Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 12:32 AM
Another masterful recitation Line,bringing the words to life
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Thank you so much, Brian ~
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Third line, my favorite!
Gauthier Avatar
September 25, 2021 at 2:27 AM
thanks, Kim ~
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