Preety promise

Can you see the rain droplets trailing down the window,
Tracing a map to utopia, 
We made a promise have you forgotten,
Well so many you couldn't count,

While whispering preety words to me I felt your warmth,
As a single crystal of memories trailing down my cheek,
Tracing a map to paradise,

I had promised to never leave your side but foolish me forgot to take the promise from your side,
Now you are a dust of gold in air,
A fregrance long forgotten,

As I look at the limitless sky,
Still holding on to that promise which fate has rejected,
Which never meant to last.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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