Predictable Outcome

Living with mom
Feeling loved and protected
Nurtured in every kind of way
 He is predictably helpless 
Never washed a dish
Or loaded a dishwasher
Never held a job 
Or paid a bill
Never dated
No secret why
Mother dies unexpectedly
World falls apart
He is helpless
Has never written a check
Or dealt with insurance agencies
Or bought groceries 
Or cleaned anything
We predicted this might happen.
But he did not notify us.
As we also predicted.
He starves to death
In front of a pantry full of food
Forty-two-years old, a grown-up baby,
Who does not know how to use a can opener. 

Written 12-06-2019
Contest: Predictable
Sponsor: Nina Parmenter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/6/2019 10:40:00 PM
Very nicely expressed in verse the predicament of too much care. Wishing all the best in the contest.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/7/2019 1:55:00 AM
Thank you Subimal. When the world was different - fifty years ago, an eighteen-year-old knew it was time to either go to college, trade school, or get married. But of course everything cost one tenth what it does today.
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