Predictable Premiere Contest Winner

'Hello Bob', I self-spoke
Inside my head.
That's what I'd say if my name was Bob.
But it's not,
My name is not Bob.

Bob would not wear dare
Nor would Bob dare wear a cloak
With lipstick in the chest pocket
And a memory-tied locket
Swimming in a fancy fruit perfume.
Bob would not hide away behind the scent of summer apples linking hands with 
Warm maple syrup jaffles.

Bob's time is scarce because
This ego-notion's motion was simply a passing thought
To create an unpredictable commotion.
'What if my name were Bob?'.

It's not,
Bob is my middle name.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/20/2020 2:22:00 PM
Hello Amy Wallace, Bob is you middle name not first. So you should be called Bob. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 12/12/2019 11:59:00 AM
'Amy, Congratulations on your top placement! David'
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Date: 12/10/2019 2:37:00 PM
congrats on your winning poem Amy
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Date: 12/10/2019 12:49:00 PM
I enjoyed this clever trophy winning poem Amy. Congratulations on your wonderful win! : )
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Date: 12/10/2019 11:45:00 AM
Another one of your writes that causes a reader to wonder, "Where is this going, and I don't care because it pulled me in." A winning poem, Amy.
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Date: 12/10/2019 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Amy. It's a fun read!
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Date: 12/8/2019 7:04:00 AM
Great poem Amy..
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Date: 12/8/2019 2:15:00 AM
This is a fun read! "Bob would not hide away behind the scent of summer apples linking hands with warm maple syrup jaffles" - LOVED that. Now I need to know what a jaffle is.
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Date: 12/8/2019 12:41:00 AM
Nice one.. Is it for the contest?
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