Predictable

What were the odds they did not know?
So many, many years ago, according to the records 
they had left in there, it seems the answer was, quite low.

How strange the paradox of nature, how unpredictable
the outcome of its selections, how some variations 
with the best chance to survive
became the human species,
became nature reflecting 
on itself, 
yet could not understand
that to stop adapting to its environment,
instead to change it, exploit it, a tipping point 
would be reached, a no going back extinction event 
would be unleashed, and adaptation would no longer be 
an option.

Oh the stories we have found! The art fantastic as the sounds
of sea on shore, birds awakening with the golden dawn and
the scent, still present in its capsule, of an ancient rose.

How primitive their science, yet how predictable
the future was for them in small steps undertook with effort:
they knew slide rule soon and to the second
when Apollo would return from the dark side of the moon;
they knew nano chip soon and to the second
when and where an eclipse of the sun would pass at noon;
they knew too soon and to what degree
rising temperatures and rising seas foretold their doom.

What were the odds they did not know
how precious was this Eden, how rare an oasis in a vast unfriendly space,
when they sealed this vault five million years ago?

(Should this poem go in the vault?  If so,
we have ten years left and then we'll know
and they'll know, too . . . we knew.)

- original poem written on the 5th of December in the year 2019 CE
Predictable poetry contest sponsored by Nina Parmenter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 12/12/2019 7:40:00 PM
wow, I love this one. I gotta see what score you got. It really rocks. Congratulations.
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/12/2019 8:57:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Appreciate your comment, coming from the best poet on PSoup! Congrats to you! I just saw that the other day (still finding more about this site and who's who) and realized I'm in way over my head. All is good. Hope to learn from all of you.
Date: 12/12/2019 6:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. You had an interesting point of view.
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/12/2019 6:39:00 PM
Thanks, Miranda. Actually two points of view: I took a chance with the poem inside a poem idea. I guess it kind of works?
Date: 12/10/2019 2:38:00 PM
congrats on your winning poem Greg
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/10/2019 2:55:00 PM
Thanks, Greg. Whoa! Never seen so many Gregs in one place before!
Date: 12/10/2019 12:19:00 PM
Greg, so nice to see a science oriented verse crop up. Dabbled in a few myself but philosophy does a tad better here at Poetrysoup. However, this is a time to applaud your writing and content. This is tough content to write to and you did a good job, if I can say so. The whole Climate Change issue is riddled with trap holes of politics and religion when you go deep but you succeeded nicely. Kudos. Kudos.
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/10/2019 12:33:00 PM
Thanks, Greg. It's unfortunate it has become so political and divisive. I hope we come to terms with it soon.
Date: 12/10/2019 12:03:00 PM
This was fantastic Greg. Congrats on your top finish in the contest
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/10/2019 12:30:00 PM
Thank you. I couldn't predict an outcome, so this was a nice surprise!
Date: 12/8/2019 10:30:00 AM
Well expreesed good luck in the contest.
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/8/2019 10:37:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. Not many rules for this contest, but now I see the sponsor prefers short poems. Oh, well. Pithy poems are harder to write!
Date: 12/6/2019 1:22:00 AM
Nicely detailed my friend Great poem for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest
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Greg Hladky
Date: 12/6/2019 7:50:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory. I wish our future was not so gloomy. It helps to have a refuge here at poetrysoup. I appreciate all of your comments!
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