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Predictable

? Poetry in such a way Restructured from afar Every thought that's on display Don’t show them who you are Instead of just the usual write Concoct a brand new scheme Touch the dark instead of light Abort the standard theme Become unpredictable Leave all that stuff behind Ending this one without love… (bet that’s not what you thought you’d find) December 3rd, 2019 The Predictable poetry contest Nina Parmenter

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/4/2020 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Kind wishes, Kai

Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 9:27:00 AM

Thanks so much Kai

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 2:42:00 PM

congrats on your winning poem Chris

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 2:43:00 PM

Thanks so much Greg. I appreciate it my friend.

Greg Hladky

Date: 12/10/2019 11:58:00 AM

Enjoyed this acrostic. Congratulations!

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 12:02:00 PM

Thanks so much Greg. I appreciate your kind words.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 12/10/2019 10:54:00 AM

Good idea Chris. Congratulations.

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 11:24:00 AM

Thanks so very much Janis. :)

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/10/2019 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations Chris... :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 12/10/2019 10:43:00 AM

Thanks my friend. I had no idea the contest had been judged.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/5/2019 11:06:00 PM

Well done! Cheers and applause - very clever, Chris. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Chris Green
Date: 12/6/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you so very much my friend. It is so nice to see you again.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/5/2019 4:11:00 AM

Wonderful acrostic ... good entry for the contest .. best wishes Chris :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 12/5/2019 11:25:00 AM

Thank you my friend for always being so nice to me.

Na Na

Date: 12/4/2019 5:28:00 PM

Your unpredictably predictable. hmmm lol. Try to figure that one out. This is a very good Acrostic Chris. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing

Chris Green
Date: 12/5/2019 11:24:00 AM

Thanks Greg. I am happy you liked this one.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/4/2019 4:02:00 PM

Dark green! Dark, Green! Dark green, Green... So smoothly did you pen this, I had no idea that it was an acrostic 'till after I'd read it. Smiles, Gershon

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 4:48:00 PM

Ha, dark green is my favorite color. Happy you found the acrostic : ) Thanks my friend.

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/4/2019 3:30:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 3:53:00 PM

Thanks so much Line.

Midnight Aurora

Date: 12/4/2019 3:18:00 PM

Lol...it's nice to mix things up a bit. People love to be surprised.

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 3:52:00 PM

Thank so much. It was hard to do but I managed to write about something different. : )

Lin Lane

Date: 12/4/2019 3:04:00 PM

Spontaneity is as unpredictable as can be, even when it comes out of left field...like this one. Good chain of thoughts.

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 3:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Lin. I figured the most unpredictable thing I could do was not write about love. : )

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/4/2019 2:42:00 PM

No, that is not what I expected to find from the best love poet on this site! A surprise for us Chris :)

Chris Green
Date: 12/4/2019 2:59:00 PM

Thank you Heidi but I believe you are now the best love poet in the site. But, I could have predicted that. : )