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Predictable

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Poetry in such a way
Restructured from afar
Every thought that's on display
Don’t show them who you are
Instead of just the usual write
Concoct a brand new scheme
Touch the dark instead of light
Abort the standard theme
Become unpredictable
Leave all that stuff behind
Ending this one without love…  (bet that’s not what you thought you’d find) 




December 3rd, 2019
The Predictable poetry contest
Nina Parmenter

Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2019

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Kai Michael Neumann Date: 1/4/2020 9:39:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Kind wishes, Kai Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 1/6/2020 9:27:00 AM Thanks so much Kai

Na Na Date: 12/10/2019 2:42:00 PM congrats on your winning poem Chris Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/10/2019 2:43:00 PM Thanks so much Greg. I appreciate it my friend.

Greg Hladky Date: 12/10/2019 11:58:00 AM Enjoyed this acrostic. Congratulations! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/10/2019 12:02:00 PM Thanks so much Greg. I appreciate your kind words.

Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 12/10/2019 10:54:00 AM Good idea Chris. Congratulations. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/10/2019 11:24:00 AM Thanks so very much Janis. :)

Sandra Adams Date: 12/10/2019 10:39:00 AM Congratulations Chris... :) hugs Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/10/2019 10:43:00 AM Thanks my friend. I had no idea the contest had been judged.

CayCay Jennings Date: 12/5/2019 11:06:00 PM Well done! Cheers and applause - very clever, Chris. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/6/2019 7:37:00 AM Thank you so very much my friend. It is so nice to see you again.

Sandra Adams Date: 12/5/2019 4:11:00 AM Wonderful acrostic ... good entry for the contest .. best wishes Chris :) hugs Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/5/2019 11:25:00 AM Thank you my friend for always being so nice to me.

Na Na Date: 12/4/2019 5:28:00 PM Your unpredictably predictable. hmmm lol. Try to figure that one out. This is a very good Acrostic Chris. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/5/2019 11:24:00 AM Thanks Greg. I am happy you liked this one.

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/4/2019 4:02:00 PM Dark green! Dark, Green! Dark green, Green... So smoothly did you pen this, I had no idea that it was an acrostic 'till after I'd read it. Smiles, Gershon Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/4/2019 4:48:00 PM Ha, dark green is my favorite color. Happy you found the acrostic : ) Thanks my friend.

Line Gauthier Date: 12/4/2019 3:30:00 PM Enjoyed your poem, Chris. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/4/2019 3:53:00 PM Thanks so much Line.

Midnight Aurora Date: 12/4/2019 3:18:00 PM Lol...it's nice to mix things up a bit. People love to be surprised. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/4/2019 3:52:00 PM Thank so much. It was hard to do but I managed to write about something different. : )

Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2019 3:04:00 PM Spontaneity is as unpredictable as can be, even when it comes out of left field...like this one. Good chain of thoughts. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/4/2019 3:07:00 PM Thanks so much Lin. I figured the most unpredictable thing I could do was not write about love. : )

Heidi Sands Date: 12/4/2019 2:42:00 PM No, that is not what I expected to find from the best love poet on this site! A surprise for us Chris :) Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 12/4/2019 2:59:00 PM Thank you Heidi but I believe you are now the best love poet in the site. But, I could have predicted that. : )