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Predictable

Predictable
Weather or not
Small talk
When the oceans stop
All bets will be off


12/3/2019
Predictable Poetry Contest 
Sponsor Nina Parmenter

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 12/10/2019 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! I always enjoy reading your work!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:33:00 AM

Thank you P.S.! Warm hugs, xomo!

Na Na

Date: 12/10/2019 2:39:00 PM

congrats on your winning poem Maureen

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:32:00 AM

Thank you Gregory :) xomo

Greg Gaul

Date: 12/10/2019 12:24:00 PM

Short and sweet Maureen. Nicely done, elegant in its own way. Congratulations.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Greg! :), xomo

Greg Hladky

Date: 12/10/2019 12:12:00 PM

Enjoyed your play on words. Congratulations, Maureen!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:31:00 AM

Thank you Greg! xomo

Debbie Knapp

Date: 12/9/2019 5:50:00 PM

Very interesting and a great play on words. I enjoyed it. Your friend, Debbie

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:30:00 AM

Thank you Debbie, xomo!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/9/2019 10:43:00 AM

So few words, such impact! Well penned Maureen! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/13/2019 7:29:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer! Season's extra warm hugs :) xomo!

Anil Deo

Date: 12/8/2019 10:34:00 PM

BIG talk about "small talk." Congrats and Season's Blessings (Shalom, shalom in Jesus/Providence)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/9/2019 7:17:00 AM

The talk nobody wants ;), Thank you Anil. Season's blessings to you and yours. xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2019 2:44:00 PM

so true, a short one that packs a punch!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/8/2019 10:16:00 PM

Thank you Andrea! We ain't seen nothin yet. ;), xomo

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/6/2019 6:54:00 PM

Predictable to be a winner, a poem to get one thinking, love it.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/7/2019 9:24:00 AM

Thank you Harry, fingers crossed on that and the other ;), xomo

Vegter Papyrus

Date: 12/6/2019 5:57:00 PM

Dangerous...and a exercise for imagery. Thanks for the forecast!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/7/2019 8:35:00 AM

Thank you, sorry, and your welcome ;), and hugs, xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/6/2019 9:21:00 AM

True but scary thought! A message to reckon with dear, Maureen! Hugs xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/7/2019 8:13:00 AM

The scariest. Thank you sweet D! Hugs and love, xomo

Ann Foster

Date: 12/5/2019 11:09:00 PM

Very clever. Ann

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/7/2019 7:53:00 AM

Thank you Ann! xomo :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/5/2019 8:47:00 PM

Hey, just saw a great deal on Ocean-proof Stop Signs. And operators are standing by now, ready to take your call! Just enter 1-800-NO W ATER. Call now! ...LOL.... You ARE the Creativity Queen! Season's best, Gershon

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/7/2019 7:52:00 AM

Circles and yields yield better flow ;), tho the oceans' currents stopping stops my air flow, literally takes the wind out of me x Hugs

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/4/2019 6:11:00 PM

Well penned originality.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/5/2019 7:48:00 AM

Thank you ML, xomo

Chris Green

Date: 12/4/2019 2:26:00 PM

Very creative Maureen. One thing I have found with your amazing work is...I can never predict what I will find when I stop by your page, and that is a good thing. Just keep being you my friend. Best wishes in the contest.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/5/2019 7:48:00 AM

Truth be told even I never know where my muse will take me ;), Thank you my friend. Hugs, xomo

Ts Poetry

Date: 12/4/2019 11:43:00 AM

No predicability here Mo

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/4/2019 12:28:00 PM

I can take that so many ways ;), xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 12/4/2019 3:32:00 AM

Brilliant twists in this one Maureen. I love the image of the oceans stopping.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/4/2019 4:07:00 PM

Simple philosophy: there are no negatives without an equal positive (or vice versa). So if you should always have a lower expectation going into a new situation. If you would fail, you already knew this; but if you succeed then your original negativity gets an extra boost. Hahaha

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/4/2019 4:02:00 PM

I wrote a paper at university "The Positivism of Negativity". I received a high grade and good remarks if this helps convince you.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/4/2019 9:16:00 AM

Don't forget the positive side of crazy!!!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/4/2019 8:25:00 AM

My lunar cycle is cycling down and I am enjoying way less lunacy. :))))

Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/4/2019 8:23:00 AM

...or the lunar cycle.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/4/2019 7:12:00 AM

It's an image that stops my diaphragm. When the global weather making ocean currents stop I can't even finish the sentence

Na Na

Date: 12/3/2019 11:01:00 PM

Hi Maureen nicely written. I predict that this poem will be picked predictably placed on the list :) Best of luck in the contest

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 12/4/2019 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Gregory! I wouldn't bet on it, not written to the sponsor's taste... longer odds ;), xomo

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