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Precious Moments of Calm (March2008)

All around I hear the sound of bird song. As I sit and rest awhile; In my special place within my garden still. Sun glistening through the archway. Dancing upon the lawn. Insects flittering from leaf to leaf. The sound of bees humming around the Hebe, Going about their daily chores. The warm sunshine lays upon my face. As I hear a cuckoo; and somewhere people laughing. Music softly playing from a neighbours open window… I sit here in the gazebo and take it all within, And sigh with blissful abandonment of absolute happiness; In this very precious moment of calm... Denise Doe

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 5:06:00 AM
Denise - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:02:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 6:54:00 PM
Denise - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2008 9:19:00 AM
I can see the scene and it is so relaxing - very well done! Great Imagery! Hear the birds and the wind and picture the gazebo..
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Date: 8/29/2008 1:05:00 PM
Thanks for this laid-back bliss, and congrats on your selection. Love, Daver
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Date: 8/25/2008 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations Denise on your beautiful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 12:55:00 PM
Nice peaceful poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 8/25/2008 6:46:00 AM
Congratulations Denise on your poem being featured this week. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2008 8:23:00 PM
Those moments are one of life's true blessings - congrats on being featured
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