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Jan.24. 2024
Precious Moments Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Regina Macintosh

 

When I plumb the depths of my throbbing heart All great moments before my eyes dart The good and bad ones I lived through The sweet and sour moments, quite a few. Life can’t always be a smooth ride through time. Sometimes it is raucous but can also sweetly rhyme. Don’t know which memories in mind will forever be ingrained Nor what precious moments through life are gained. In the winding course of life, sometimes we feel blest. And some moments stand out more than the rest. One such moment was the time I knew God’s love. When into great serenity and peace, me, He drove. Gently I tip toed into a cloistered chapel through the rear entrance. The serenity there was so overwhelming that I fell into a trance. There was nothing of grandeur to arrest the eyes, save a crucifix. It was hung on the bare wall made of unplastered red bricks. As I stood with hands folded, nothing did I see, But a gentle whisper I heard, filling me with a rare glee. A riot of colors and gorgeous spires soon emerged, Legions of angels sweetly sang and my soul was purged. Seraphs lined up with bugles in hand as I stood at Heaven’s gate. Don’t know how long I got lost in that blissful state. I felt a slice of paradise unveiled before me; a sight never beheld. A rare peace filled me and my heart in sheer joy swelled. Pleasant was the sensation that replenished the soul. Deep it was and deeper than ever, filling me whole. Sucked to the fill, the peace and quietude that exuded. Lay afloat in the joy that welled, from all pain felt secluded. It was a feel too deep, more appealing than all the riches, I felt instantly liberated from all bondages and glitches. Trapping that celestial feel and wrapped in heavenly grace, I stepped out with a vow that my wicked ways I shall renounce. The light He gave me that day never fails to lead. His mercy supplies me with all that I need. With Him, how safe and secure I feel inside. He is now recognized as my life’s greatest guide!

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Date: 2/1/2024 6:45:00 AM
I love this. Congrats and much love. God bless you always, Gina
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Date: 1/28/2024 8:06:00 AM
What a deeply moving, wise and profound write this is dear valsa, congratulations on your well deserved win, i love the way you’ve delivered this with so many lines that depict faith and light and how youv found yourself amidst life and its fickle phases, you’ve really nailed it as always and i especially love the ending plus how you’ve written “ I stepped out with a vow that my wicked ways I shall renounce. “ i hear a strong and determined voice, soul hitting poem this is! Congratulations!
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Date: 1/26/2024 4:51:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Valsa, a lovely experience of peace and love from above, just what is needed sometimes in our lives. Blessings, Beryl
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Date: 1/24/2024 9:44:00 PM
Lovely entry for the contest, Valsa. Thanks for sharing your experience of Love with us through your poetry, my dear friend. I hope all is well with you and those you love. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 1/24/2024 10:50:00 AM
Nice devotional poem.
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Date: 1/24/2024 10:03:00 AM
I love how your poem beautifully explores the depths of the your heart and the profound moments that have left an indelible mark on their soul. The initial reflection on life's diverse moments, both sweet and sour, sets the stage for a journey of self discovery and spiritual awakening.
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Date: 1/24/2024 6:21:00 AM
Beautiful poem love it, if we could be good on our own Jesus death and all gospel is in vain, we all need this Love and Spirit within to manifest us into what God sent His Son to die for, the promised inheritance of the Spirit to dwell within: )
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Date: 1/24/2024 1:07:00 AM
Life has its ups and downs. But we must keep the faith that in the end, all will be well.
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Date: 1/24/2024 12:28:00 AM
Though life has many turbulent storms we keep our faith and follow the light that will one day lead us to paradise. Good luck in the contest Valsa. Tom
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