Jan Allison Poet Free verse

Precious Gems

They are most precious gems you can possess
They cannot be brought in any jewellers shop
They are more valuable than platinum
They are more rare than flawless D grade diamonds
They shine in your life like 18 carat gold
They are unique
They are special
They are priceless
They are …
True friends


11~18~14
Contest: Precious Stones and Gems
Sponsor: Anthony Slausen

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Brenda Meier-Hans November 19, 2014 at 6:22 PM Brilliant take on the contest Jan. Good luck. Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:27 PM Thanks so much Brenda:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus November 19, 2014 at 4:53 PM Excellent write Jan; and you are right...true friends beat priceless gems anytime! Hugs // paul Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:14 PM Thanks so much Paul:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser November 19, 2014 at 3:30 PM Your so right Jan. Nothing beats having good friends. Wonderful words here, James :) xx Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:14 PM Thanks so much James:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian November 19, 2014 at 2:12 PM This is a lovely write, Jan. Friends are everything. I'm so grateful that I have some very dear and precious ones. Hugs Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:13 PM My too Eileen and so many lovely ones here who have made my life so complete:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne November 19, 2014 at 1:05 PM You are a precious Gem Jan. Love you. I am going to fav this one with my heart. Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:12 PM aww thanks so much - love you too my lovely friend:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne November 19, 2014 at 12:53 PM Congratulations on your first place...oops too early. I keep forgetting I'm phychic...well not a true one...I can predict the past flawlessly. Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:12 PM lol me too Maurice and amazingly Freddie has risen from the dead I predict I will never comment on his work again! Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne November 19, 2014 at 12:48 PM I thought you were going to say testicles as in "the family jewels!" that would be nuts...literally. That would of been a ball...or two! With Christmas coming you could use some figs. You know for a figie pudding...never mind. Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:11 PM lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne November 19, 2014 at 12:43 PM "They are the most precious gems you can possess. They can not be bought in any jewellers shop." (Jan check what I wrote with what you wrote. You might want to make these minor changes) Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:10 PM thanks I will amend the poem accordingly Maurice:-) Hugs jan xx

Liam Mcdaid November 19, 2014 at 11:15 AM very beautifully crafted jan Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:08 PM thanks so much Liam:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nehpets Gnik November 19, 2014 at 9:31 AM Wonderfully phrased. A free Verse well noting! Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 6:08 PM Thank you so much Nehpets:-) Hugs jan xx

Gail Gilbride Bohle November 19, 2014 at 7:30 AM Hi Jan Wise words indeed! Lovely warmth about your poem. Well done:) Gail GB Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 7:35 AM Thanks so much for dropping by Gail:-) Hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2014 at 11:25 PM a fave! Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 2:03 AM Thank you so much Andrea I do appreciate that:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2014 at 11:25 PM I SO AGREE with this one. Friends are everything Jan. And you would be a diamond!! Maurice Yvonne November 19, 2014 at 12:55 PM Can I watch? Maurice Yvonne November 19, 2014 at 12:54 PM Why don't you two get a room! Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 2:04 AM I'm not flawless lol but thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr November 18, 2014 at 10:10 PM ok you set me up on the second line I should have seen that coming but it just made my curiosity grow. Then you kicked the bucket out from under me in the last line. Well done I enjoyed this poem. Good luck in the contest Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 2:02 AM Thanks so much Robert:-) Hugs Jan xx

David Meade November 18, 2014 at 10:03 PM You nailed it . . . I was wondering where you were going and was greatly delighted with the last line. Wise and true words . . . my friend. Jan Allison November 19, 2014 at 2:01 AM Thanks David for your continued support:-) hugs Jan xxx

Jack Ellison November 18, 2014 at 7:09 PM Was waiting for a funny punch line... see how you've trained us! LOL This was better... sweet write! Huggsies, Jack XXX Jan Allison November 18, 2014 at 7:14 PM Thanks Jack I do appreciate you dropping by - I do try and write with humour whenever i can:-) Hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong November 18, 2014 at 6:53 PM A fantastic entry for the contest Jan. So true, our friends love us the way we are! I like where you took this. Best of luck in the contest! Jan Allison November 18, 2014 at 6:54 PM Thanks so much for the lovely supportive comments Connie:-) Hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser November 18, 2014 at 6:29 PM So true, good luck with the contest. Jan Allison November 18, 2014 at 6:31 PM Thanks so much ML:-) hugs jan xx

Matthew Anish November 18, 2014 at 5:18 PM William Blake wrote, "The spider a web, the bird a nest, man friendship". You echo those sentiments in your well crafted poem. Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Jan Allison November 18, 2014 at 5:20 PM Thank you so much for the lovely comment Matthew:-) hugs Jan xxx

Faye Gibson November 18, 2014 at 4:29 PM I really like this, Jan. I have found it to be true. Best wishes. Jan Allison November 18, 2014 at 4:33 PM Thank you so much Faye:-) I know with the tough times I am facing I have very special people I know will be there to support me :-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop November 18, 2014 at 4:16 PM Family and Friends are indeed the most precious gems.I wouldn't tradr tjem for the world.Thankyou for being a friend Jan.Btw Your chocolate cake is delicious :.) Jan Allison November 18, 2014 at 4:25 PM Thanks for the lovely comment Charma:-) oh did you try it... the Betty Crocker one? I don't think it will arrive with the birthday boy until Wednesday - guess there will be none left on his birthday on Thursday lol:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Shadow Hamilton November 18, 2014 at 4:01 PM superb take Jan a 7 from me hugs Jan Allison November 18, 2014 at 4:06 PM Thanks Shadow - its written from the heart - with everything going on in my life it makes me realise how valuable TRUE friends are:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith November 18, 2014 at 3:40 PM How sweet...I thought you were thinking of something else but friends are true gems...hugs Tim Jan Allison November 18, 2014 at 4:06 PM They are Tim and I am so blessed to have some lovely special friends here:-) hugs Jan xx