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Precious Fare

In cage, box and vault, behind the well locked door; he held his earthly treasurers, counted by the score. Dust covered purple amethysts, lice laced parrot maws, aged harem beauties; lay on cushions bout the floor. Each once had shone like starlight, within the earthen core, and danced or flown in far off lands, which were their homes no more. All tawdry now, decline their fate, decay hung in the air, but on he sat in darkness; pondering his precious fare.

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Date: 2/6/2011 5:17:00 PM
oooh, lice laced? WEll, that sure shoots down my wanting to store away a parrot maw!! I really like the ending of this one, he just sits there still pondering his fare. Great message,how it all goes back to dust in the end! Luv, andrea
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Date: 6/9/2010 6:46:00 PM
You have a way of painting such a wonderful pictures with words. I can she "him" in the darkness, behind the locked door. It rates a 7 for me.. love constance
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Date: 3/19/2009 8:29:00 PM
This hits very close to home. This is beautifully written. Please check your Soup mail. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 12/23/2008 10:12:00 AM
well said, i really loved this one alot
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Date: 12/23/2008 8:19:00 AM
For some.....that's all that is left behind. Decayed and meaningless, and worthless. ~ Well done, Deborah. Love, Carrie
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Date: 12/22/2008 6:19:00 PM
Deborah sounds like he had it all - or - like he really had nothing - reckon its all in the eye of the beholder - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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