Precious

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one sing- le drop burst- ing with emo- tion, caught as if in a buck- et that was kick- ed. lost in plain sight and found with a stiff hug. treas- ured for- ever, until death sheds a- nother drop. 5/20/2021

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Buhagiar Victor

Date: 5/21/2021 2:07:00 AM

Painful memories are hard to forget. Hugs my friend and be consoled.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 5/20/2021 4:22:00 PM

So poignant and touching, Kim. Anyone who has grieved can relate. Kindest regards, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:46:00 PM

Thank you :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 3:06:00 PM

life is so precious my friend, your poem touched me deeply especially as we were unable to comfort our dear friend when her husband died as we had to adhere to the covid restrictions, thinking of you:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:47:00 PM

I can’t imagine! Hugs xxoo

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/20/2021 2:44:00 PM

Wow!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/20/2021 5:47:00 PM

Thank you, Christuraj!