Preach

preach, you pretty leaves,
  sentinels of Autumn scene.
         lift, before you land
   on mortal soil.
in your past days
little ones could reach you
     only with tenacity and courage.
earth-bound, you’re raked and cradled,
  in gleeful and determined arms,
you’re piled high,
and now you see your child fly -
     he leaps into your arms.
 the clock’s forward reach -
a sexagenarian sees Autumn leaves
     and feels the weight of them
         as a sapient chill arrives

                    11/1/2022
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Pandit Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Grand opening: preach, you pretty leaves, sentinels of Autumn scene...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Thank you so much, my friend! :)
Kyser Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 5:06 AM
this is a great juxtaposition of the coming "death" of winter and life/children finding joy in the pile of leaves. Very nice, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 9:11 AM
Thanks so much, Jeff! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 4:33 AM
- Autumn is a short period ... beautiful when the weather is sunny ... time turns to rain and winter is fast approaching ... a great poem, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 9:10 AM
It really is short, yet beautiful and bountiful. Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise! Hugs ~
Buhagiar Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 2:52 AM
Great contrast between seasons. Autumn is lovely in a way but beware of winter. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Thank you! Hugs ~ Kim
DiMino Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 5:20 PM
"a sexagenarian sees Autumn leaves and feels the weight of them as a sapient chill arrives" Ain't that the truth! Yep!~ got all the spots, the creases, and the sagging branches...but a sense of humor remains in place. A wool-shawl helps with the chill, but to smile despite is somehow an insanity worth cultivating.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 7:52 PM
Thanks for your awesome comment, Joe!
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