Preach

preach, you pretty leaves,
  sentinels of Autumn scene.
         lift, before you land
   on mortal soil.
in your past days
little ones could reach you
     only with tenacity and courage.
earth-bound, you’re raked and cradled,
  in gleeful and determined arms,
you’re piled high,
and now you see your child fly -
     he leaps into your arms.
 the clock’s forward reach -
a sexagenarian sees Autumn leaves
     and feels the weight of them
         as a sapient chill arrives

                    11/1/2022

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Date: 11/2/2022 5:48:00 AM
Grand opening: preach, you pretty leaves, sentinels of Autumn scene...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2022 9:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend! :)
Date: 11/2/2022 5:06:00 AM
this is a great juxtaposition of the coming "death" of winter and life/children finding joy in the pile of leaves. Very nice, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2022 9:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jeff! :)
Date: 11/2/2022 4:33:00 AM
- Autumn is a short period ... beautiful when the weather is sunny ... time turns to rain and winter is fast approaching ... a great poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2022 9:10:00 AM
It really is short, yet beautiful and bountiful. Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise! Hugs ~
Date: 11/2/2022 2:52:00 AM
Great contrast between seasons. Autumn is lovely in a way but beware of winter. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2022 9:10:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 11/1/2022 5:20:00 PM
"a sexagenarian sees Autumn leaves and feels the weight of them as a sapient chill arrives" Ain't that the truth! Yep!~ got all the spots, the creases, and the sagging branches...but a sense of humor remains in place. A wool-shawl helps with the chill, but to smile despite is somehow an insanity worth cultivating.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 7:52:00 PM
Thanks for your awesome comment, Joe!
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