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preach, you pretty leaves, sentinels of Autumn scene. lift, before you land on mortal soil. in your past days little ones could reach you only with tenacity and courage. earth-bound, you’re raked and cradled, in gleeful and determined arms, you’re piled high, and now you see your child fly - he leaps into your arms. the clock’s forward reach - a sexagenarian sees Autumn leaves and feels the weight of them as a sapient chill arrives 11/1/2022

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Date: 11/2/2022 5:48:00 AM
Grand opening: preach, you pretty leaves, sentinels of Autumn scene...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2022 9:11:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend! :)
Date: 11/2/2022 5:06:00 AM
this is a great juxtaposition of the coming "death" of winter and life/children finding joy in the pile of leaves. Very nice, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2022 9:11:00 AM
Thanks so much, Jeff! :)
Date: 11/2/2022 4:33:00 AM
- Autumn is a short period ... beautiful when the weather is sunny ... time turns to rain and winter is fast approaching ... a great poem, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2022 9:10:00 AM
It really is short, yet beautiful and bountiful. Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise! Hugs ~
Date: 11/2/2022 2:52:00 AM
Great contrast between seasons. Autumn is lovely in a way but beware of winter. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/2/2022 9:10:00 AM
Thank you! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 11/1/2022 5:20:00 PM
"a sexagenarian sees Autumn leaves and feels the weight of them as a sapient chill arrives" Ain't that the truth! Yep!~ got all the spots, the creases, and the sagging branches...but a sense of humor remains in place. A wool-shawl helps with the chill, but to smile despite is somehow an insanity worth cultivating.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/1/2022 7:52:00 PM
Thanks for your awesome comment, Joe!

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