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Pre-Storm

The wind picks up, the clouds roll in; A storm, real soon, may yet begin. The river roils, the birds steer clear, Confirming that it’s coming near. And still I sit, as others stroll, The day still firmly in control. The forecast may, in fact, be wrong, As some suspected all along. The blue’s receding from the sky; A single boat goes chugging by And if, indeed, some rain we’ll get, The worst will be I’ll run home wet.

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Date: 6/18/2022 7:55:00 PM
I like the optimism that comas pouring out of this poem.
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Date: 5/18/2022 8:08:00 AM
You're right. THEY are all wet; not you, Ilene!
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Date: 5/17/2022 1:24:00 PM
Only Ilene Bauer could make a rainy day this exciting lol, sounds like a day here its been horrid the past 2 days but I did manage to get my walk in before work this morning, was out of the house by 7am:-)
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Date: 5/17/2022 11:17:00 AM
Another clever write enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 5/17/2022 9:30:00 AM
The blue’s receding from the sky; A single boat goes chugging by
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Date: 5/16/2022 1:58:00 PM
Don't forget your umbrella Ilene, chances are we'll cop for the tail end of it in a few days time lol. Tom
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