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Praying Mantis

Oh, praying mantis, there with majesty,
you hold your slender arms so still and sweet,
in prayer like form that somehow makes us see
a kind and gentle species when we greet.

Your odd, triangle face responds your way
by nodding side to side, as if you hear
and grasp the words we speak and so convey-
to be beside you does not carry fear.

But, in the world, you live- yet to survive
another side of you is seen, exists.
A murderer you are- eat your mate live;
your coupling ritual exhibits twists.

Your mate is lucky to have found a chance
to spread his genes, his only goal in life;
to offer up his body in this dance-
a trade-off for his offspring to be rife.

With head gone first, he still completes his act
depositing his precious sperm; when done
you throw him to the ground and after that
soon feed on him to nourish life begun.

Oh, praying mantis, there with majesty
you hold your slender arms as if in prayer. 
But looks so often can deceive, you see;
a murderer you are- his fate, unfair.


August 15, 2016

Contest: Insects
Sponsor: Angela Tune
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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May Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 9:54 PM
A fatal attraction...Congrats on your win Sandra..
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Well done, Sandra. Congratulations.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Sandra, your poem sure made me smile. They only do what comes naturally. After all they do pray after killing and eating their mate! Lol. I loved your clever entry! Congratulations on your fantastic second place. Very deserving! 7 ; )
Lawless Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Well, Sandra, there are those who believe that the male of all species are devoured by the demands of their mates - some quickly, some slowly. Great job on the iambic pentameter and the smoothly flowing rhythm of the rhymes.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Brutal but great! Congrats, Sandra!
Nusker Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The ritual of their mating is nicely put in place. Enjoyed reading it.
Arnone Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 12:26 PM
Sandra, how expertly you weaved this narrative of the majestic, dual-faced Praying Mantis.... ;-)
Daniel Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:44 AM
This is beautifully done, Sandra:) Very nicely written:)
Kannan Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:14 AM
Nicely done... Good luck in the contest...
James Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 2:34 PM
Perfect meter! and fearfully true..
Turner Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 12:03 PM
Very informative in a poetic way, Mrs Sandra. Enjoyed reading you today.
Inman Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Good write, good meter Sandra.
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 10:19 AM
Great informative write Sandra .. I've just posted mine lol:-) Good luck in the contest:-)hugs Jan xx
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