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Oh, praying mantis, there with majesty, you hold your slender arms so still and sweet, in prayer like form that somehow makes us see a kind and gentle species when we greet. Your odd, triangle face responds your way by nodding side to side, as if you hear and grasp the words we speak and so convey- to be beside you does not carry fear. But, in the world, you live- yet to survive another side of you is seen, exists. A murderer you are- eat your mate live; your coupling ritual exhibits twists. Your mate is lucky to have found a chance to spread his genes, his only goal in life; to offer up his body in this dance- a trade-off for his offspring to be rife. With head gone first, he still completes his act depositing his precious sperm; when done you throw him to the ground and after that soon feed on him to nourish life begun. Oh, praying mantis, there with majesty you hold your slender arms as if in prayer. But looks so often can deceive, you see; a murderer you are- his fate, unfair. August 15, 2016 Contest: Insects Sponsor: Angela Tune

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Date: 9/17/2016 9:54:00 PM
A fatal attraction...Congrats on your win Sandra..
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Date: 9/17/2016 1:07:00 PM
Well done, Sandra. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:37:00 PM
Sandra, your poem sure made me smile. They only do what comes naturally. After all they do pray after killing and eating their mate! Lol. I loved your clever entry! Congratulations on your fantastic second place. Very deserving! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:24:00 PM
Well, Sandra, there are those who believe that the male of all species are devoured by the demands of their mates - some quickly, some slowly. Great job on the iambic pentameter and the smoothly flowing rhythm of the rhymes.
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:14:00 PM
Brutal but great! Congrats, Sandra!
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Date: 8/21/2016 12:00:00 AM
The ritual of their mating is nicely put in place. Enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 8/19/2016 12:26:00 PM
Sandra, how expertly you weaved this narrative of the majestic, dual-faced Praying Mantis.... ;-)
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Date: 8/16/2016 4:44:00 AM
This is beautifully done, Sandra:) Very nicely written:)
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Date: 8/16/2016 2:14:00 AM
Nicely done... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 8/15/2016 2:34:00 PM
Perfect meter! and fearfully true..
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Date: 8/15/2016 12:03:00 PM
Very informative in a poetic way, Mrs Sandra. Enjoyed reading you today.
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Date: 8/15/2016 10:40:00 AM
Good write, good meter Sandra.
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Date: 8/15/2016 10:19:00 AM
Great informative write Sandra .. I've just posted mine lol:-) Good luck in the contest:-)hugs Jan xx
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