Prayer of the Afflicted

Prayer of the afflicted

Dear Lord, 
God and Father 
of all tender mercies,

Please allow me 
to beseech you 
in my time of affliction,

I know Dear Father,

that you care for
even the sparrows,
how much more so
you care for 
your faithful servants...
especially 
in our time of need

I know not of my sins,
as I cannot see my own
imperfections, and
it is hard to see myself 
as you do,
through your loving lens

Dwelling as I do,
in this earthenware vessel
of your making,

my treacherous heart
tries to impose it's will,
but thanks to your Word
and the power you have given me
I have thus far continued to 
battle my fallen flesh

I am unaware of my sins
and for these I am truly sorry
as I must have failed you
in thought, word or deed

I know you alone 
are wholly righteous
and,
only because of your mercy, 
and loving kindness
can I approach you in prayer

thanks for giving us your
Son as a ransom on our behalf,
although many of
humankind do not know,
or appreciate,
your loving gift,
I do!

I look forward to 
your righteous new world,
as promised in your Word,
where all suffering and even death
will be swallowed up forever

I have faith in you,
that you will 
keep your promises
as you are a God 
who cannot lie

until then dear Father,
please help me 
to endure my afflictions,
to endure this wicked world
and it's sadistic ruler

until your time comes 
to step into human affairs
once again,

please continue to bless me
even though I am nothing but dust;
but, you in your Majestic Mercy
and Loyal Love of Righteousness
understand my incompleteness
and forgive

In Jesus name,

Amen


John Derek Hamilton
August 23,2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 1/1/2020 1:01:00 AM
Amen to that. Well written, heartfelt and relatable.
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John Hamilton
Date: 1/1/2020 11:50:00 AM
Thanks Juliet, I'm glad you enjoyed, it's a prayer that helps keep me feeling grateful. Gratitude in turn promotes happiness. I appreciate your kind visits and support!
Date: 10/16/2019 9:14:00 AM
Well worth reading again.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/16/2019 10:48:00 AM
Thanks Rick I'm glad you passed by this poem and my page, I'm always happy to see you, and I'm pleased you enjoyed this today and left a nice comment. Have a great day!
Date: 8/27/2019 10:34:00 AM
I do enjoy stopping by to read you! Inspiring!;)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/27/2019 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Brenda I do appreciate you kind visits!
Date: 8/26/2019 11:25:00 PM
Beautifully penned, can c your faith in every line. Well done.Thanks for sharing.
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/27/2019 10:00:00 AM
Thanks for your kind visit and gracious words.
Date: 8/26/2019 11:21:00 AM
Your poem expresses such humility, John. We don't see that often. Your poem reads like a beautiful prayer and I'm making a copy of it so I can recite this now. My brother is very ill and I hope this poem will help his recovery. Bless you for sharing this special piece. Hugs, Carolyn
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/26/2019 12:32:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn for your kind thoughts, we can only be humble before God, we are nothing in relation to God's greatness, and anyone who challenges that immutable truth will have problems. Thanks again
Date: 8/26/2019 8:48:00 AM
Amen! Thanks for this heartfelt prayer. Blessings Richard.
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/26/2019 9:51:00 AM
I knew you would find this and comment Rick, thanks for your positive feedback!
Date: 8/25/2019 11:58:00 AM
awww, how wonderful to read such truth in the Word. I shall always believe this to be true. His love for us and forgiveness too. Beautiful prayer :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/25/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I knew you would comment on this, I do appreciate your kind support!
Date: 8/24/2019 8:40:00 AM
Brilliant write John, bringing to us how we should pray to our great God and father. Truly inspiring and uplifting, Gordon
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2019 1:08:00 PM
Thanks for your enthusiastic support Gordon, I do appreciate your kind visit!
Date: 8/24/2019 6:48:00 AM
amen...
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2019 1:07:00 PM
Thanks SO short and sweet, but effective!
Date: 8/24/2019 6:37:00 AM
I love this prayer you have written and hope that it will reach many, as it has me. Bless you :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2019 1:06:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I hope so to, your nice comment is a great start!
Date: 8/24/2019 3:26:00 AM
A beautiful prayer of supplication John. I pray daily and nightly for family and friends in need but mostly I give thanks for the many little blessings I am given. We are all connected as children of God and prayer powerfully unites us with God. This is very beautiful John. Blessings xxoo
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2019 12:59:00 PM
Thanks Connie for your encouraging words and kind visit
Date: 8/23/2019 8:35:00 PM
Such an uplifting and inspirational prayer and if there were more people praying and thinking like you this world would be a better place...the power of prayer works, powerful words reach those who need them sometimes...all we can do is pray for forgiveness and hope that one day we will reign in a better land...Amen John...love this one! :) hugs
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/24/2019 1:00:00 PM
I appreciate you heartfelt thoughts and feelings of thankfulness.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/23/2019 8:43:00 PM
some of us are thankful everyday...with my family lines, i am thankful every day, i am thankful to see the rise of sun each morning, thankful for all things in my life, but mostly thankful to be able to live another day....
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/23/2019 8:38:00 PM
Thanks Sandy I thought you may come by and comment, it's true less and less people think about God, maybe when they're in trouble or in need then they pray, but what about the good times are we thankful? I try to be everyday!
Date: 8/23/2019 6:53:00 PM
Powerful prayer. I love the passage that reminds us of how Jesus offered himself as a ransom for our sins. There is great freedom in knowing that as believers in Christ we are free from condemnation. This is the wonderful news that an unbelieving world needs to hear. They also need to see it lived out with sincerity and conviction. May Christ continue to bless you and all believers.
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/23/2019 8:36:00 PM
I appreciate your visit and kind words W.A may all who read this poem reflect on God's love in Christ our Lord.
Date: 8/23/2019 4:22:00 PM
Peace and serenity reign in every word of humility. A heartfelt, sincere longing you describe for mercy..may your words find divinity, John. Inspiration for all.
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/23/2019 5:26:00 PM
A beautiful comment Vijay thanks for your kind and complimentary words! May it be so!
Date: 8/23/2019 3:19:00 PM
- What a beautiful prayer you lift up to God, John :) - Amen - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/23/2019 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise for your kind visit and comment!
Date: 8/23/2019 1:35:00 PM
A beautiful, heartfelt prayer, John! I, too, appreciate God's wonderful gift of His Son. Blessings, Kim
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/23/2019 2:24:00 PM
Thanks Kim...I knew that you would be one to comment, and I do appreciate it.
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