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Prayer Changes

I sit down to offer my prayers open to a new page of Life, my old pages with curled corners binds in with its wear and tear rife. Eyes closed I begin to pray to ink a new lyric fresh and sweet, off my mind goes astray to a cry from an old sheet. Routine pleas turns into a ritual a repetitive run with no change, the pages of Life echo like a manual or a sheaf of papers, with no range. Mist of the morning clears with shine, Mental fog clears with thoughts fine; No longer do I sit, ask and whine In giving, I find my living shrine feeling Joy, peace and love in this opus of mine. 22-Dec-2017 Sponsored by: Line Gauthier MORNING RITUAL - Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/5/2018 1:53:00 AM
"Mental fog"..every one understands. What a good write. Congrats.!
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Sathya Babu
Date: 1/6/2018 3:57:00 AM
Thank You so much Barbara. Best Regards,Sathya
Date: 1/4/2018 10:13:00 PM
Very well done, Sathya - congratulations on your win, and Happy New Year, my friend! :-)
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Sathya Babu
Date: 1/6/2018 3:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot Gregory. Thank for these Wishes and I Wish you too a GREAT Year my friend :-) Regards, Sathya
Date: 1/3/2018 1:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Sathya on your fine win.
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Date: 1/2/2018 8:29:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Sathya. I particularly loved the way you wrapped it up.
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Sathya Babu
Date: 1/2/2018 7:11:00 PM
Thanks for organizing this contest I enjoyed participating in this. Yes the conclusion has a shift in my poem and that is what I meant prayer changes (shift in what you pray for). The title has two meanings:-). Regards,Sathya
Date: 12/22/2017 9:51:00 AM
Wonderful! My best to you in the contest :) xomo
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Sathya Babu
Date: 12/22/2017 11:22:00 AM
Thanks a Lot Maureen for the visit.....and Thank You for the note. Regards, Sathya

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