Prayer Changes

I sit down to offer my prayers
open to a new page of Life,
my old pages with curled corners
binds in with its wear and tear rife. 

Eyes closed I begin to pray
to ink a new lyric fresh and sweet,
off my mind goes astray
to a cry from an old sheet. 

Routine pleas turns into a ritual
a repetitive run with no change,
the pages of Life echo like a manual
or a sheaf of papers, with no range.

Mist of the morning clears with shine,
Mental fog clears with thoughts fine;
No longer do I sit, ask and whine
In giving, I find my living shrine
feeling Joy, peace and love in this opus of mine.


22-Dec-2017
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier
MORNING RITUAL - Poetry Contest
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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 1:53 AM
"Mental fog"..every one understands. What a good write. Congrats.!
Babu Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:57 AM
Thank You so much Barbara. Best Regards,Sathya
Barden Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 10:13 PM
Very well done, Sathya - congratulations on your win, and Happy New Year, my friend! :-)
Babu Avatar
January 6, 2018 at 3:56 AM
Thanks a lot Gregory. Thank for these Wishes and I Wish you too a GREAT Year my friend :-) Regards, Sathya
Sinha-Roy Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 1:11 AM
Congratulations, Sathya on your fine win.
Gauthier Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Congrats on your win, Sathya. I particularly loved the way you wrapped it up.
Babu Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Thanks for organizing this contest I enjoyed participating in this. Yes the conclusion has a shift in my poem and that is what I meant prayer changes (shift in what you pray for). The title has two meanings:-). Regards,Sathya
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December 22, 2017 at 9:51 AM
Wonderful! My best to you in the contest :) xomo
Babu Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Thanks a Lot Maureen for the visit.....and Thank You for the note. Regards, Sathya
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