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Prayer Affair Bt

"Love thy neighbour!" And so my aunt gave him the eye... for Charles' Bauk-Than contest

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/17/2021 5:14:00 AM

Cute as long as there is no Uncle on the side! Congratulations!

Charles Messina

Date: 2/15/2021 9:34:00 PM

LOL...Love this, Jack. Congrats on your win!

John Watt

Date: 12/18/2020 11:15:00 PM

Very fun, Jack and so eloquently stated. One question - does your uncle know? ~ John

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2020 3:26:00 PM

Lol! Jack, Great poem.Was it meant to be funny? It caused be to laugh out loud. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/16/2020 3:26:00 PM

Lol! Jack, Great poem.Was it meant to be funny? It caused be to laugh out loud. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/12/2020 10:53:00 AM

And what happened thereafter she had given him the eye, did he love his neighbor and give her the eye? This was fun Jack, I so love your humor! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/11/2020 1:22:00 PM

Ha ha....this is a good one, Jack :) As required, this is a smooth flowing sentence with the internal rhymes right on spot. ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/10/2020 3:05:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. I think she misunderstood the commandment. LOL..Thanks for the visits. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 12/10/2020 12:43:00 PM

ha ha ha hilarious!:-) hugs jan xx