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Prayer - Ziket

plea for fruition of wants God or servant? 3rd position in ziket contest

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Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/18/2020 6:06:00 PM

We're all servants under God. Precise sentiment.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/19/2020 3:49:00 AM

But we keep giving him innumerable tasks, always asking for something. If we have love and faith, we would stop praying for fulfillment of wishes.. Thanks for reading and commenting. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/18/2020 3:48:00 PM

Nicely done! Congrats to you.

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/19/2020 3:51:00 AM

Your appreciation makes my day. Thanks and congratulations to you too. God bless you.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2020 2:38:00 PM

well penned Rama congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/19/2020 3:54:00 AM

Your appreciation makes my day. Thanks and congratulations to you too. You said so much in just two lines . I would have surely given you a top win. God bless you.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/18/2020 7:31:00 AM

Sharp ink! Congratulations for your win, xomo

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/18/2020 11:31:00 AM

Thanks Maureen. Stay blessed. Didn't see your entry. Though you will participate and win top position. Take care. Rama