Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Powerful Storm

Drenching rains, no shape nor form
Howling winds, skies midnight black
Lightning striking, a powerful storm
Our little haven, now under attack

Plans for our moonlit stroll are dashed
No lights, no music, just you and me
Squeezing me tighter with every flash
Letting our two longing hearts be free

Waiting out the storm, we cuddle by the fire
Enjoying the crackling embers until it's done 
Soft touches, slow kisses, both showing desire
Two kindred spirits, coming together as one

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Liam Mcdaid November 25, 2014 at 4:53 AM very beautifully painted tim excellent piece Tim Smith November 25, 2014 at 4:57 AM Thank you Liam my friend

Arthur Vaso November 23, 2014 at 10:39 PM when I read the title at first i was sure this was about the Montreal Canadians!!! :) Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 10:49 PM :)....I heard it's early

Arthur Vaso November 23, 2014 at 9:36 PM I see the snow in buffalo is not all bad after all!!!! :) Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 10:38 PM Always something good...bet their will be a spike in new babies next August

Jack Ellison November 23, 2014 at 7:16 AM The imagery is great Tim! The weather's gone wacko here... in the 20s for about a week and now they're predicting close to 60 tomorrow! Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 7:21 AM Enjoy the 60's it is only going toget colder

Anne-Lise Andresen November 23, 2014 at 6:36 AM - A really great poem Tim!- Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 7:18 AM Thanks A-L you have a great Sunday as well...hugs Tim

Kayod5 Kayode November 23, 2014 at 5:42 AM The rain has done all good and no harm...imaging "Squeezing me tighter with every flash",I can't wait to have my rain Tim. I like this my friend ; great...huggs as you continue the needful. Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 5:46 AM Thank you my good friend

Dr. Upma A. Sharma November 23, 2014 at 3:48 AM Indeed romantic Tim ! I too like it the way u hv said in ur beautiful words! I hv missed reading ur poems for quite sometime. Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 5:06 AM Thank you Upma...I have to reciprocate myself... Hugs Tim

Eve Roper November 22, 2014 at 10:29 PM I am reading this and the roaring thunder is going on out my window, and I hate thunder :'( blessings eve Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 5:05 AM I love the sound of a good storm...I don't know why...it just seems romantic... Hugs Tim

Andrea Dietrich November 22, 2014 at 7:22 PM sounds so romantic!! and cuddling in a warm bed during snow storm. that is really nice too! Tim Smith November 23, 2014 at 5:03 AM Thanks Andrea...are you getting s lot of snow in Utah?

Maurice Yvonne November 22, 2014 at 5:38 PM Great write! Tim Smith November 22, 2014 at 6:55 PM Thank you my friend

David Meade November 22, 2014 at 5:26 PM Now that's the way to ride a storm out!! I like the play of crackling embers -- both from the wood burning and the souls connecting. nicely crafted my friend. I'm off to check the weather report -- hoping for a storm! Tim Smith November 22, 2014 at 6:55 PM Thanks David...every cloud has a silver lining

Brenda Meier-Hans November 22, 2014 at 3:22 PM A real romantic evening. It's great when the weather brings you closer. Tim Smith November 22, 2014 at 3:24 PM Thanks Brenda... It sure is...hugs Tim

Gary Bateman November 22, 2014 at 3:22 PM Tim, A really nice write here. I really liked how you transitioned to the third quatrain. What a wonderful conclusion to the powerful storm raging in the other two quatrains!! Well-Done, Sir!! Best Always, Gary Tim Smith November 22, 2014 at 3:26 PM Thank you my good friend...I haven't been on too much the past few days I have to catch up..

Charmaine Chircop November 22, 2014 at 2:58 PM What a beautiful surprise...No powerful storm will break that little haven Tim,Im sure. Sooo Romantic,Adding it to my favs!Charma. : ) Tim Smith November 22, 2014 at 3:02 PM Thanks Charma...glad you liked it..Nothing better than being cuddled up by a fire in a storm....hugs Tim

Jan Allison November 22, 2014 at 2:49 PM hope you two have fun Tim:-) hugs jan x Tim Smith November 22, 2014 at 2:54 PM Thanks Jan...We will :) ...hugs Tim

Eileen Manassian November 22, 2014 at 2:48 PM :) Beautiful, Tim. Could there be a sweeter scene than this. Enjoy your time with your loved one. Tim Smith November 22, 2014 at 2:51 PM Thanks Eileen...I sure hope to..hugs Tim