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Powerful Storm

Drenching rains, no shape nor form
Howling winds, skies midnight black
Lightning striking, a powerful storm
Our little haven, now under attack

Plans for our moonlit stroll are dashed
No lights, no music, just you and me
Squeezing me tighter with every flash
Letting our two longing hearts be free

Waiting out the storm, we cuddle by the fire
Enjoying the crackling embers until it's done 
Soft touches, slow kisses, both showing desire
Two kindred spirits, coming together as one

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/25/2014 4:53:00 AM
very beautifully painted tim excellent piece
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/25/2014 4:57:00 AM
Thank you Liam my friend
Date: 11/23/2014 10:39:00 PM
when I read the title at first i was sure this was about the Montreal Canadians!!! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/23/2014 10:49:00 PM
:)....I heard it's early
Date: 11/23/2014 9:36:00 PM
I see the snow in buffalo is not all bad after all!!!! :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/23/2014 10:38:00 PM
Always something good...bet their will be a spike in new babies next August
Date: 11/23/2014 7:16:00 AM
The imagery is great Tim! The weather's gone wacko here... in the 20s for about a week and now they're predicting close to 60 tomorrow!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/23/2014 7:21:00 AM
Enjoy the 60's it is only going toget colder
Date: 11/23/2014 6:36:00 AM
- A really great poem Tim!- Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/23/2014 7:18:00 AM
Thanks A-L you have a great Sunday as well...hugs Tim
Date: 11/23/2014 5:42:00 AM
The rain has done all good and no harm...imaging "Squeezing me tighter with every flash",I can't wait to have my rain Tim. I like this my friend ; great...huggs as you continue the needful.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/23/2014 5:46:00 AM
Thank you my good friend
Date: 11/23/2014 3:48:00 AM
Indeed romantic Tim ! I too like it the way u hv said in ur beautiful words! I hv missed reading ur poems for quite sometime.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/23/2014 5:06:00 AM
Thank you Upma...I have to reciprocate myself... Hugs Tim
Date: 11/22/2014 10:29:00 PM
I am reading this and the roaring thunder is going on out my window, and I hate thunder :'( blessings eve
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/23/2014 5:05:00 AM
I love the sound of a good storm...I don't know why...it just seems romantic... Hugs Tim
Date: 11/22/2014 7:22:00 PM
sounds so romantic!! and cuddling in a warm bed during snow storm. that is really nice too!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/23/2014 5:03:00 AM
Thanks Andrea...are you getting s lot of snow in Utah?
Date: 11/22/2014 5:38:00 PM
Great write!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 6:55:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 11/22/2014 5:26:00 PM
Now that's the way to ride a storm out!! I like the play of crackling embers -- both from the wood burning and the souls connecting. nicely crafted my friend. I'm off to check the weather report -- hoping for a storm!
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 6:55:00 PM
Thanks David...every cloud has a silver lining
Date: 11/22/2014 3:22:00 PM
Tim, A really nice write here. I really liked how you transitioned to the third quatrain. What a wonderful conclusion to the powerful storm raging in the other two quatrains!! Well-Done, Sir!! Best Always, Gary
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 3:26:00 PM
Thank you my good friend...I haven't been on too much the past few days I have to catch up..
Date: 11/22/2014 3:22:00 PM
A real romantic evening. It's great when the weather brings you closer.
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Brenda... It sure is...hugs Tim
Date: 11/22/2014 2:58:00 PM
What a beautiful surprise...No powerful storm will break that little haven Tim,Im sure. Sooo Romantic,Adding it to my favs!Charma. : )
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Date: 11/22/2014 3:02:00 PM
Thanks Charma...glad you liked it..Nothing better than being cuddled up by a fire in a storm....hugs Tim
Date: 11/22/2014 2:49:00 PM
hope you two have fun Tim:-) hugs jan x
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 2:54:00 PM
Thanks Jan...We will :) ...hugs Tim
Date: 11/22/2014 2:48:00 PM
:) Beautiful, Tim. Could there be a sweeter scene than this. Enjoy your time with your loved one.
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 2:51:00 PM
Thanks Eileen...I sure hope to..hugs Tim