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If by some coup of divine luck I had to wisely say, I would enlighten you around your exquisite way. Notwithstanding, they appear to slip from my grip, Wet wails are set down, and they correctly air slip. No, I'm not leastwise, going to attempt, The gentle words solace me while I wept. With each murmur, they scream in agony, The conflict with each peek and squinny. Finding meaning is beyond difficult while composing, Others sentiments and erratic behavior in portraying. It scarcely appears to be enthusiastic and precarious, They abet in the expression of regret and terrible sadness. At this point, not a wellhead of bother in my life, It's not a potential benefit, tragically but strife. Uplifting affirmations and dominant motivation, The broke advantages of the historic mansion. The text reveals a likely path to heaven, It's up to them to halt what's in regression. I don't have any power while I'm creating, I only host the party, and words start coming. Kindly be sure to write as regards to me, I'm a poem provide me a spot to see. I'll unfurl, and I hope to receive gold, My story is being related but not sold.
Written: April 25, 2022 1st place contest winner POEM ON POETRY MUSE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Beata Agustin

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Date: 5/1/2022 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful write for Beata’s contest. Blessings to you
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Date: 4/29/2022 7:36:00 PM
Wow! What a beautiful poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 4/29/2022 7:59:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for your participation, making this poetic occasion jubilant. Belated Poetry Day, dear poet. God bless you.
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Date: 4/29/2022 6:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, dear Beata. Your reading commenting and placing of my poem means a lot to me and it’s appreciated.
Date: 4/26/2022 8:40:00 AM
Dear Scotto - Hello. Allow me to say this is original creative and well thought out. Your rhyming was never forced. Your ending stanza sums it all up with perfection not that the entry in its entirety is not because it is to which we can all agree with your thoughts and message. Best wishes for the contest although this entry stands on its own. Thank you for sharing. All my best, take care.
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Date: 4/26/2022 10:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for your nice sentiments, Lisa. I really appreciate them. As one of the most talented poets, I can put my trust in what you've said.
Date: 4/26/2022 5:18:00 AM
Your creative energy shines my friend. A lovely poem on composing--a gift of muse.
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Date: 4/26/2022 1:30:00 AM
A great poem. Your arguments are so apt.
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Date: 4/25/2022 7:42:00 PM
Lasaad, this is one of the best things you have ever written, in my humble opinion. Worthy of repeated readings and P.O.T.W.! Good luck in the contest. I hope Beata sees in it everything I did and more.
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Date: 4/25/2022 8:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Milt, for your kind words. As one of the world's most accomplished poets, I can rely on what you stated. Your feedback is really valuable to me, and it means a great deal to me.

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