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Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/30/2013 8:34:00 AM

Compact and so powerful. Well done. Thank you for your visit and warm comments.

Diane Munsinger
Date: 12/1/2013 1:34:00 AM

Hello again Monterey! And I very much appreciate your meaningful comments. Please visit again-Diane

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2013 11:00:00 AM

- This haiku was very inventive. . . like it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Munsinger
Date: 11/26/2013 8:42:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise! It's always such a pleasure to hear from you. Thanks for sticking up for me! What a pleasant surprise!! Of course, the strength of Scandinavian women should NOT surprise me! :) Diane

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/22/2013 4:33:00 AM

Hello, you write with nice images, but look to form of haiku which is of three lines and 17 syllables, diane

Diane Munsinger
Date: 11/26/2013 9:03:00 AM

Hello Dr. Mehta, I don't think my poem is haiku, so I've changed it temporarily. Thank you for bringing that to my attention. I'm not one that believes in rules when it comes to ones writing. I believe that usually your best writing comes from within, and usually from the heart. Rules can put a hamper on your talents, in my opinion. Diane

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/23/2013 11:02:00 AM

- Such comments should be written in an S-mail, Dr. Ram. - // Anne-Lise :)