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Green fluorescent glow
lights up his cell
bombs explode intermittently
leaving mushroom clouds

soldierwarfree verse

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Monterey Sirak

November 30, 2013 at 8:34 AM

Compact and so powerful. Well done. Thank you for your visit and warm comments.

Diane Munsinger

December 1, 2013 at 1:34 AM

Hello again Monterey! And I very much appreciate your meaningful comments. Please visit again-Diane

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 23, 2013 at 11:00 AM

- This haiku was very inventive. . . like it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Diane Munsinger

November 26, 2013 at 8:42 AM

Hi Anne-Lise! It's always such a pleasure to hear from you. Thanks for sticking up for me! What a pleasant surprise!! Of course, the strength of Scandinavian women should NOT surprise me! :) Diane

Dr.Ram Mehta

November 22, 2013 at 4:33 AM

Hello, you write with nice images, but look to form of haiku which is of three lines and 17 syllables, diane

Diane Munsinger

November 26, 2013 at 9:03 AM

Hello Dr. Mehta, I don't think my poem is haiku, so I've changed it temporarily. Thank you for bringing that to my attention. I'm not one that believes in rules when it comes to ones writing. I believe that usually your best writing comes from within, and usually from the heart. Rules can put a hamper on your talents, in my opinion. Diane

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 23, 2013 at 11:02 AM

- Such comments should be written in an S-mail, Dr. Ram. - // Anne-Lise :)

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