Pour Soul

POUR SOUL
				Shivering and naked,
Crying,crying and its in the night, 
Mamma and poppa happy for the new born, 
Earth and heaven celebrating for the new guest,
But the guest got the danger ahead.

You bastard,you ain't my blood,
Go die in another place and live my blood alone, 
Stupid and foolish son of a whore,
Die now or tomorrow i don't care,
Sit in that corner,
Never come near my family, 
You understand bastard?
Am not your mother,never will be,
Want the family heir,hope you won't get it.

Stop you snake and thief,
Live on streets,
Sleep in your own house, 
Not my compound and near my children,
Wandering around the rubbish is my wish for you,

I curse you till the end of your days, 
Wish heaven and hell don't take you,
You rascal and idiot, 
My blood not worth to your blood, 
Live another life but not hear in my presence.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 2/2/2018 11:44:00 AM
Thanks to of you people who wish luck due to my work. May God Bless you all Blessings!!
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Date: 12/26/2017 6:34:00 AM
Such depth of thought/simplicity of expression this powerful poem be, Morris. You are a very skillful thinker ... you most definitely got the linguistic chops to be a formidable poet of note. That's my humble opinion ... and I ain't no slouch potato poet myself. Lol! LOVE this poem, it is so stylistically cool. Truth poetry w/sting ... beeline delivery your ghetto soul sing honeycomb honesty. Drop the love and knowledge on us. Welcome, my poetic brother. May love light your path always.
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Freddie Robinson Jr.
Date: 12/26/2017 6:56:00 AM
Btw ... welcome to PSoup, bruh. May your pen shine always w/many blessings of grace and truth. Love and happy holidays to you and yours.
Date: 12/22/2017 3:53:00 AM
Powerful poem Morris! Looking forward to see more of your work
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Date: 12/4/2017 1:25:00 PM
Loved it
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Date: 12/4/2017 9:21:00 AM
This is a real catharsis, Morris.A great purgation of emotion.Take it easy, Morris
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Date: 12/4/2017 9:08:00 AM
Please guys help me know if i got the guts to be a poet by commenting on the POUR SOUL poem
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Raven Tones
Date: 12/4/2017 1:25:00 PM
Poetry is much easier online then in person. I use to write by using this method. Thinking of a simple word, describing its meaning in one sentence And writing down possible words in alphabetical order. This poem you have here is original I can feel the description of the emotions. "I Look forward to more deep dark soul to lighten up my own" Use the quote as an inspiration
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