Potpourri Ghosts- Contest

Potpourri Ghosts

                                      Knock and a bang and a yell
                           Wake up to the call of the Halloween Ghosts!
     My girls all in their teens dressed as witches with brooms cried loud with friends 
                           Fill our decorated baskets with treats  
                                       The night is long and 
                             All our ancestors souls are hungry
                           Fill our decorated baskets with treats 
                          Tonight they want their grandest feast 
                        Or they'll make your quivering hearts bleed
                                          In the rivers of Hades!
                                           A potpourri of sizes
                                       In a masquerade planned
                                           Over a month or two 
                                               Loudly order all.
        My heart yearns for the fulfilment of their impish desires and silently pray 
                                  Pull up the blinders of your windows
                                      You sleepy friendly neighbours
                              Lookout at all these angelic pumpkin heads 
                              Wendy Witches, green goblins, cutest devils
                                Bold batmen religiously donning costumes
                                       Ripping  apart souls of normal wear.
                                                Thus having tricked you 
                                         They joyously whisper at having
                     Spelt fear in the hearts of their muscled uncles and stern aunts
                                               Proudly these little creepers
                                    Jest pretending to be nocturnal predators 
                                 Of their elders hiding their uncontrolled smiles
                                        Behind their guises of Halloween Night
                                 Gamble baskety treats or a night to be tricked.


FIFTH
The October 24, 2015
Contest: Happy Halloween
Sponsor: Kelly Deschler
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 11/2/2015 3:33:00 PM
Awesome, Balveen!! And I see this won in a contest as well. BIG congrats to you. You described those trick or treaters to a tee.
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Date: 11/1/2015 11:00:00 AM
Balveen, Congratulations on your Halloween win in Kelly's contest. SKAT
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/1/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thanks ever so much Skat! Balveen
Date: 10/31/2015 12:12:00 AM
Love it! Congrats! Made me go back in time.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/31/2015 6:13:00 AM
Thanks for visiting my page and your praises!
Date: 10/30/2015 4:58:00 PM
Congratulations on a great story and win. Love, Joyce
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/31/2015 6:13:00 AM
Joyce, thanks for uour appreciation! Love, Balveen
Date: 10/30/2015 2:16:00 PM
A great poem that brought back fun memories of Halloween night... I enjoyed your poem very much, Balveen! Congrats on a win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/30/2015 2:32:00 PM
Thanks you so much Kelly both for reading and appreciating my write! God Bless! Balveen
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