Potential For Hail

potential for hail unsettling quiet - birdsong interlude

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/12/2023 8:35:00 PM

Oh, the dreaded/welcome 'calm before the storm.' ~ Feel it coming! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 5:08:00 AM

Yes! Thank you!

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/12/2023 5:50:00 PM

The force and spell of nsture you’ve set out here is so completely presented for me. It casts me into a full environment of touch and sound. A resounding work. Actually very comforting. Thank you for sharing this. Good to see you!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 5:08:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sally!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/12/2023 3:36:00 PM

Hi Kim, imagery is perfect in this one. It's not that easy to write a haiku as you have to convey so much in that short succinct format. Enjoyed.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 5:07:00 AM

Thank you, Nancy!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/12/2023 3:43:00 AM

This is a perfect haiku. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2023 7:25:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! I appreciate you, my friend!