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Potawatomi's Beginning...

The story I have to tell- was told long ago to me, About the creation of the Potawatomi Nation; In the beginning the Creator made Anishabe, And the Creator told Anishabe to name all of his creations, Anishabe set out with a wolf, his companion, And he went around naming everything; From the mountains and the canyons, To the Summer and the Spring; He became lonely realizing, he alone had no mate, And as he traveled everywhere searching, He traveled towards the Great Lakes; And there he heard a woman singing, Her song was a thing of beauty, About the home she was making for them; Anishabe crossed the lake to meet her, finally, The daughter of the Firekeeper-And quite a gem Their’s was the first unity bond, It is where life came from; Of each other they were inordinately fond; Their union gave life to four sons, Each of their sons went a different way, The First son traveled North, it’s color is White, henceforth; Given the first gift of the Creator-sweet grass-braided in a bouquet, He married the daughter of the Spirit of the North; The second sun traveled East, into the rising sun, He learned that fire is the essence of life; He was given the second gift-herbs to speak with the One, East is the color Yellow, East’s daughter became his wife; The third son traveled South, known as “The Way of The Woman”, The way of seeds and all that give life, the color of South is Red; He was given the gift of cedar-to purify and prepare food for his clan And to the daughter of the Spirit of the South he was wed. The last son traveled west, towards the mountain highlands, He learned that the setting sun represents the circle of life; Black is the color of West-Sage was the gift for his hands, Married to the Spirit of the West’s daughter, Black stands for strife. This is the story of the Creator, That my Grandmother told to me, How my culture was started, And what our banner means. ~I've been holding on to this a while-Hope you enjoy the beginning of my culture~ ~3rd Place in the "Broad Horizons" Contest by Deborah Guzzi~

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Date: 7/1/2010 6:34:00 PM
Beautiful rendition of a story that should be told in all elementary schools ... unfortunately out country is still euro-centric and boring as always ... LOL ... Haven't "met" you yet Tirzah and I want to say Welcome to PoetrySoup !! Thank you for bringing your talents to our wonderful site and congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest !! Keep up the great writing ... you are a wonderful teacher! and I look forward to reading more of your writing soon.
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Date: 6/30/2010 2:43:00 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your big win in Debbie's contest with this wonderful write and unique piece on your chosen theme.. enjoyed.. bravo my friend. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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Date: 6/30/2010 2:07:00 PM
What a wonderful story you have shared, of your culture, and your heritage Tirzah!! Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
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Date: 6/30/2010 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Broad Horizons". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2010 3:44:00 AM
Dear new friend and supporter! ;) If you might be open to suggestions This could be broken out into N,s,e,won the page and would be a bit easier to absorb other than that..I'd say it GRRREAAAAAAAAAAT! Light & Love from Dawn Flower
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Date: 6/17/2010 4:42:00 PM
Wow, what an amazing story filled with folk tradition, wisdom and history. Absolutely spellbinding narrative, Tirzah!! This poem was written on a very intelligent level and deserves recognition in the contest. Best wishes to you (I saw below that Deborah said you could enter it). Don't think you'll need "luck" to win this competition. Outstanding poem! Goes to my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/17/2010 4:42:00 PM
Thank You so so much-I'll enter it right away!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/17/2010 4:28:00 PM
dear friend you may enter this since I am sure Frank was not going to do this tribe. I will add the tribe beside your name...Light & love
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