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Portrait of Mr F Shui

Written by Gail DeBole on February 4, 2013

A man with the name of Feng Shui
Arranged his life in a Qi-loving way.
Full of sweet harmony,
And life planned to a “T”,
Bad Karma didn’t “stand” in his way!

Note: Illustrated in Coloring within in the Limericks available on Amazon.com and other retail websites.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 5:50 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, gail
Oyewole Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 1:32 PM
An outstanding limerick... Well done~A.O
Esquire Avatar
March 24, 2013 at 9:06 PM
Dear Gail,Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I have never written a Limerick but I do Appreciate them and this is Superb. I will start reading YOUR Portrait Collection. - I was just reading Harry Horsman's Winning Poem "Living POETRY" in the Contest "One of YOUR Greatest Days" Sponsored by Dan Kearley. I noticed YOU commented on this POEM before He Won. I was wondering if YOU were going to send him Congrats. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
Horsman Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 1:31 AM
wow, so different, and so good
Bauer Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 3:47 PM
ha! very funny!
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February 4, 2013 at 2:27 PM
Gail, a nice limerick - lovely. - Thank you for your visit on my last poem. - Buttons are not trash - they can be used for much ..... use your imagination. - (Flower pins, hair ornaments , on card, on pillows .....) Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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February 4, 2013 at 2:26 PM
Great one with a little twist on words and humor..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by ..It is windy, cloudy, and cool to me but was above freezing this morn..Sara
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