Portrait of Hannah and Otto On a Lake

Written on April 14, 2012


Hannah and Otto lived by a lake
In a house with an address of 8008.

Some nights they would kayak around and around
So quietly; there was nary a sound.

One night they heard an erie toot and some beeps
And rowed towards the sounds without making a peep.

They each gasped twice when they saw what was there.
It was Ogopogo coming up for air!

Ogopogo turned and smiled at them
They were both wowed; he seemed like a friend.

It turned out that he was quite civil and charming
His conversation was respectful and, therefore, disarming.

And at the end of the exchange, he asked, “Do you happen to know
Where my girlfriend, Loch Nessie, would possibly go?

I’ve been looking around this lake for centuries, it seems
And if I don’t find her soon, I will simply scream!”

Gail DeBole
Palindromes
Ogopogo 
(There have been claimed sightings of Ogopogo, a Canadian Lake monster that is commonly described as a 40 to 50 ft. sea monster.)
Hannah
Otto
8008
Erie
Kayak
Toot
Peep

Note: Part of the Portrait Poetry Collection

Palindrome Mad Contest
Seventh Place
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Van Brunt Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 7:10 PM
So much fun! Love the romantic implications - and the sense of vast time passing.
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 1:07 PM
Got a chuckle..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:30 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Gail. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:20 PM
Congrats on your win, Gail. Outstanding. Great write. Nice going. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:31 PM
Well done , Congratulations xx
Peranteau Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 12:48 PM
I'm a believer in Big Foot and Ogopogo Gail...from what I've seen on videos and photos ! You really did a fine job with this write dear poet ! Thanx for sparking my imagination today. Have a wonderful weekend....Much love, james
Phookan Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 4:35 AM
Lovely work on palindromes.. and quite an interesting read on Loch Ness/ 'Nessie' here:D that's a sweet ogopogo. Good luck in the contest.. love, gautami
Mjelde Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Keep up the good penning, great work!Good luck in the contest!! Thanks for stopping by! xoxo - Laila
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 4:21 PM
This I like alot Gail.....well done. Have a lovely week. - Luck in contest. - oxox Anne-Lise
Bauer Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 3:28 PM
a wonderful use of palindromes, told in a charming way. good luck in the contest!
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