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Portrait of a Young Man

The portrait hangs on my living room wall A young man whom I’ve never met at all. In warm pastels an artist caught his essence Somehow I wanted to enjoy his presence. I found him in a Savannah antique shop And seeing his portrait I just had to stop. Invariably folks ask if he is Adam, my son So, as I am wont to do, I have a little fun. “No,” I say, “A lad I picked up in Savannah.” When they gasp, I add, “Oh, holy Hannah!” Then we have a good laugh, they admire, When nonchalantly I add, “He was for hire!”
Written June 9, 2022

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Date: 6/12/2022 6:50:00 PM
Very good one!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/12/2022 7:05:00 PM
Thanks, Marco. My humorous side was showing. The story is absolutely true, though. I wish I knew who did the pastel, but the artist blurred his/her name so as to make it unidentifiable. Makes no difference. Good work is good work and is to be appreciated. So, I hired him!...to hang on my wall.
Date: 6/9/2022 9:04:00 PM
This was remarkable; a fine and fun tale!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 6/11/2022 11:15:00 PM
PS Since it is done in pastel, we know it was not me!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/9/2022 9:23:00 PM
I got a really big kick out of writing this, Caren. It is true. I have this young man (whom I have no idea who is) hanging in my living room. But, the pastel is really good. I wish I knew who did it.
Date: 6/9/2022 8:51:00 PM
Excellent tale. Ball of yarn with two needles in it. Smiles, Gershon
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/9/2022 9:23:00 PM
It is, indeed, gw. I've had such fun with it. But, in all honesty, it is a very, very good pastel!

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