Portrait of a Winter Farm

Steel-gray clouds have filled the sky
To linger, on a cheerless day
Laying ice upon a weary world
Of rolling hills, and pastures deep

Small herds seek shelter among the trees
And flocks of geese form arrows high
To flee the wail of windmill cries
North winter winds so wet with sleet
Have buried fields, once primed for wheat

With the weight of burdens never done
A lone man works without a sun
Entrenched in white beneath his feet
Wearing overalls, boots deep in soil
And fleece upon his heart of toil
A pitchfork heaped with mounds of hay
That blanket fields of frigid gray

There's a horse drawn wagon, sunk in mud
Waiting till the master is done
He labours on, as the evening falls

It is too cold to wipe his dampened brow 
His woolen hat...  it glistens now
With cheeks of red, he steels his breath
Like his forefathers did, until their deaths
Humble pride,  long hours to bear
Another day that he will wear

Repeating task of many years
So weary on his shoulders lay
A legacy that's long to stay
The timeless cloak of winter's day



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Brown Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on your win in Moses' "Pictures of winter" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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December 6, 2011 at 1:36 AM
Congratultions xx
Quigley Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 10:49 PM
Carrie, this one just pulled me right in. I could visualize everything. So well written. Congratulations
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Everyone Knows" contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Congrats Carrie on a super fantastic win with this exciting poetry luv.. enjoyed reading...
Quigley Avatar
October 22, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Loved the graphics of this one Carrie. You drew a picture. Congratulations on your win
Griffiths Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations Carrie, a wonderful poem. Pam
George   Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 8:43 AM
Dear Carrie, a vivid living picture that touched me deeply. Congratulations on your win. Love, Lainie
Brown Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 3:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's Let it Snow Contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 8:12 PM
Enjoyable and descriptive write, Carrie, and congrats on your win in the Let It Snow contest... u have always been exceptionally kind to me with your encouraging comments and I want to extend good wishes to u ... enjoy your winning moment.. I am honored to be sharing the same stage with u as an honorable mention... keep at it and sharing too.. Linda-Marie
Johnson Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 7:07 PM
You drew a very good picture of the drudgery of farming in the winter. I think how hard my Daddy worked but know at the same time that he wouldn't have wanted any thing than his farm. Congratulations on your win. Joyce
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May 3, 2009 at 9:39 PM
Carrie, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
Brown Avatar
April 28, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Congratulations on your three poems making it into the semi finals Carrie. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
Winter Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 5:07 AM
Warmest congrats Carrie on all three amazing poems making it through the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love & hugs, shar xoxo
Townsend Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 11:50 PM
Carrie, your words are written with so much skill and passion. Congratulations on being featured this week, it is very well deserved. Smiles from Lolita
Adeite Avatar
March 27, 2009 at 3:02 AM
great and glorious is thy pen. this piece is awesome, cool rhyming, great imageries. keep writing and congrats on a well deserved feature... Adeleke
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March 26, 2009 at 9:30 AM
I still like this and it's about time it was featured. Congratulations Carrie on "Winter Farm" being a featured poem. Vince
Austin Avatar
March 26, 2009 at 7:45 AM
Rustic and wonderful! A perfect portrait such as Sandberg would have loved. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Fontes Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Congrats on being featured this week! Kirstie
Brown Avatar
March 25, 2009 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Mckenzie Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 1:21 PM
Carrie Wonderful story Congratulations on your featured poem! Love Laura :)
Goff Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 7:52 AM
nice feature Carrie! this poem tugs at my heart, I understand the 'blue collar ethic' Jim
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March 23, 2009 at 7:04 AM
Congrats on being featured Carrie...
Scott Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 6:03 AM
Congrats on being featured. Wonderful poem!
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March 23, 2009 at 4:57 AM
Congrats on being featured :)
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