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Portrait - Female With Wine

PORTRAIT – Female with wine She’s looking off, chin lifted - Some afternoon reverie – This full-faced blue-eyed blond dreamer A slim-stemmed glass of red is prominent, but barely sipped Her expression (the redness in her eyes) is Well not a brown study but surely not bliss No I’m guessing this musing has some soul-lingering favor – A lover? A loved one departed? There is a certain intensity A relaxed…fat preponderance Her elbows on the table at rest Arms, fingers cradling Her long, flaxen hair sits atop both shoulders with a certain… With flowing sophistication Hope? No. More a doting resignation “When the loving flame dies Smoke”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/24/2012 2:47:00 PM
I've just taken a trip to the art museum and enjoyed the old Dutch Masters? Am I correct. Nicholas Maes is one of my favorite-are you familiar with his work? Also reminiscent of "The Girl with the Pearl Earring" by Vermeer-you've captured your subject beautifully.
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:11:00 PM
Her chin tilts as she catches my eye, I look to the side and down/ the scent of soup wafts from the kitchen..a folded white cloth napkin lays across her thighs ...Light & Love
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Date: 10/18/2012 2:46:00 PM
good it's posted here. THis is an awesome study of a painting.
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Date: 10/18/2012 2:45:00 PM
Very descriptive and expressive work..I could almost see the scene..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 10/17/2012 11:00:00 PM
I see a picture from.your.words Daver. Was this taken From life? I think you have put well the air of sad resignation? quite a good write I say."
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Date: 10/17/2012 6:11:00 PM
Very good poetry. Deep piece my friend. Michael
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