Porcupine

Porcupine If you happen across a porcupine, Staring upon the Milky Way, It’s because he thinks he’s an Alien, and longs to return home one day.

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Pat Adams

Date: 9/12/2017 6:15:00 PM

You have a strange mind Mr. Shaw but I like it a lot. Good write!...........Pat

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/27/2017 8:00:00 PM

This certainly is a funny one Kevin ! lol

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2017 5:33:00 PM

hahah.. this made me chuckle, Kevin... I can see how he would be taken for an alien ..

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 8/26/2017 7:59:00 AM

This is sweet. I have a cute animal nonsense poem about cows and fences but it is in Free Verse so would not qualify. Best, Suzanne It is called Cow Decorators. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/cow_decorators_471440

Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/22/2017 12:13:00 AM

Funny and cute.Trying to follow.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2017 9:02:00 PM

this is SO cute. I am glad I looked up your example of how you want us to do your contest.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/18/2017 6:02:00 AM

Thinking outside the box!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2017 6:25:00 PM

funny rhyme Kevin I'll see what i can come up with for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/17/2017 4:35:00 PM

Cute and creative, Kevin. Janice

Kevin Shaw
Date: 8/17/2017 4:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, regards, Kevin