Porcupine

Porcupine

If you happen across a porcupine,
Staring upon the Milky Way,
It’s because he thinks he’s an Alien,
and longs to return home one day.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Adams Avatar
September 12, 2017 at 6:15 PM
You have a strange mind Mr. Shaw but I like it a lot. Good write!...........Pat
Sands Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 8:00 PM
This certainly is a funny one Kevin ! lol
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 5:33 PM
hahah.. this made me chuckle, Kevin... I can see how he would be taken for an alien ..
Delaney Avatar
August 26, 2017 at 7:59 AM
This is sweet. I have a cute animal nonsense poem about cows and fences but it is in Free Verse so would not qualify. Best, Suzanne It is called Cow Decorators. https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/cow_decorators_471440
Dutta Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 12:13 AM
Funny and cute.Trying to follow.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 9:02 PM
this is SO cute. I am glad I looked up your example of how you want us to do your contest.
Pandit Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 6:02 AM
Thinking outside the box!
Allison Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 6:25 PM
funny rhyme Kevin I'll see what i can come up with for the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:35 PM
Cute and creative, Kevin. Janice
Shaw Avatar
August 17, 2017 at 4:39 PM
Thank you so much, regards, Kevin
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace