Pop Tart

She declined to eat a pop tart Because all that fruit makes her fart Yet tends to favour Raspberry flavour For rhapsodies straight from the heart

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 3/31/2021 2:39:00 AM

She blew a raspberry.... Poke tongue out and blow out.... I thought the limerick was clever I am just going to pop off and see if I can write one too.. G'Day Rico. Take care... Shirley

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/22/2021 5:05:00 PM

G’day Rico … I guess we all have a delight that allows us to play indoor games with our friends. Mine is Jerusalem artichoke - thanks Rico - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/23/2021 10:58:00 AM

We all hope you are keeping your head (and poetry) above water down there! Aloha! Rico

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/22/2021 1:51:00 PM

Lol, good one Rico. Tom

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/23/2021 11:22:00 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Tom! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/22/2021 1:19:00 PM

Ha ha, love a good 'raspberry' - any kind ;)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/23/2021 11:22:00 AM

My son would welcome you into his home! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2021 11:29:00 AM

lol thanks so much for the giggle Rico:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/22/2021 12:48:00 PM

My Darling Clementine is forever blowing raspberries! Aloha! Rico

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/22/2021 11:20:00 AM

Jan wrote about milk making a person fart and now we have to be careful with fruit too? At least she chose a good flavor. Delightful limerick, Rico! Hugs, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 3/24/2021 1:47:00 PM

Ohhh....

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/22/2021 12:47:00 PM

"raspberry" has a double-meaning to Brits. Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico