Pop Tart

She declined to eat a pop tart
Because all that fruit makes her fart
Yet tends to favour
Raspberry flavour
For rhapsodies straight from the heart

foodwindlimerick

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Shirley Hawkins

March 31, 2021 at 2:39 AM

She blew a raspberry.... Poke tongue out and blow out.... I thought the limerick was clever I am just going to pop off and see if I can write one too.. G'Day Rico. Take care... Shirley

Lindsay Laurie

March 22, 2021 at 5:05 PM

G’day Rico … I guess we all have a delight that allows us to play indoor games with our friends. Mine is Jerusalem artichoke - thanks Rico - Lindsay

Rico Leffanta

March 23, 2021 at 10:58 AM

We all hope you are keeping your head (and poetry) above water down there! Aloha! Rico

Tom Cunningham

March 22, 2021 at 1:51 PM

Lol, good one Rico. Tom

Rico Leffanta

March 23, 2021 at 11:22 AM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Tom! Aloha! Rico

Michelle Faulkner

March 22, 2021 at 1:19 PM

Ha ha, love a good 'raspberry' - any kind ;)

Rico Leffanta

March 23, 2021 at 11:22 AM

My son would welcome you into his home! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison

March 22, 2021 at 11:29 AM

lol thanks so much for the giggle Rico:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

March 22, 2021 at 12:48 PM

My Darling Clementine is forever blowing raspberries! Aloha! Rico

Carolyn Devonshire

March 22, 2021 at 11:20 AM

Jan wrote about milk making a person fart and now we have to be careful with fruit too? At least she chose a good flavor. Delightful limerick, Rico! Hugs, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

March 24, 2021 at 1:47 PM

Ohhh....

Rico Leffanta

March 22, 2021 at 12:47 PM

"raspberry" has a double-meaning to Brits. Thank you for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico