Paula Swanson Poet Free verse

Pop

snap
snap chew chew
snap,chew
puff...*pop*

snap snap snap
chew chew chew
puffffpuff......*Popp*

snap, snap, snap, snap,
chew..chew...chew......
puuuffff, pufffff, puff

mmmm, mmmhhh, yook't it.

**POP!!**

Uh oh!




For the contest:  Bubbles
Placement: Honorable Mention

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Lee Ramage September 15, 2011 at 8:07 AM So nice, well done. Congrats on your HM. Lee

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 13, 2011 at 6:23 PM CONGRATS PAULA ON YOUR HM IN BUBBLES CONTEST MY FRIEND.. ENJOY HONOR LUV..

Debbie Guzzi September 12, 2011 at 4:03 PM A jolly little ditty too! Congrad's Paula now go wild with unmentionables think of something no one else will I KNOW you can! light & love

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 3:47 PM Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Bubbles"contest Paula. Love,Carol

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 3:33 PM hey Paula congrats on your win, i really like this one..David

Carolyn Devonshire September 12, 2011 at 3:25 PM So creative and witty, Paula. I love it! Congratulations on your success in Deb's contest! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick September 12, 2011 at 2:53 PM Cute one..I can just see the scene..Congrats on your win..Sara

Nancy Jones September 9, 2011 at 6:38 PM AWESOME!!

Kim Merryman September 9, 2011 at 6:18 PM Clever and fun write! Best wishes for the contest! Kim

Phyllis Babcock September 9, 2011 at 2:47 PM you had me thinking now what could it be and at first I thought rice krispies but then noticed the bubbles contest. Love Phyl