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Poor Percy

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Poor Percy acted like a schmuck I guess he was down on his luck He looked quite a sight His pants were too tight He waddled around like a duck 18th May 2016

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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 5/28/2016 11:54:00 PM
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Be careful Jan, you might find the ducks are upset - Lindsay
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2016 5:57:00 PM
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lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 5/21/2016 11:10:00 PM
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haha :-) chuckles more !!!
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:29:00 PM
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Thanks so much Lenny:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/20/2016 1:29:00 PM
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Excellent, Jan; witty and with flowing meter. Hugs // paul
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/22/2016 4:29:00 PM
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Thanks so much Paul I am working hard to find good ones for the book:-) hugs Jan xx
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Alexis Y.
Date: 5/20/2016 10:46:00 AM
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Hi Jan, Lol! You really are the limerick "Queen". Nice picture too. Well done- Alexis
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2016 12:30:00 PM
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Thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/19/2016 9:04:00 PM
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haha. love the picture you put with it.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/20/2016 12:29:00 PM
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I had to tone done from the one I really wanted to post lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Jean Murray
Date: 5/19/2016 4:02:00 PM
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I could lend him my CORSET as it doesn't fit me anymore.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 4:14:00 PM
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lol Jean must be all that good food when you were on holiday:-) hugs Jan xx
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Archontoula Alexandropoulou
Date: 5/19/2016 3:10:00 PM
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It's capital! really!
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 3:23:00 PM
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Thanks:-) hugs Jan xx
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Sara Chansarkar
Date: 5/19/2016 3:09:00 PM
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Hilarious, I can picture Percy!thanks Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 3:23:00 PM
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Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2016 9:09:00 PM
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LOL, another great limerick! Now I except nothing less! ( and from what I saw here, a lot more! ) LOL
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 1:31:00 AM
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Progress for the book is slow atm Arthur hope my muse picks up:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tim Smith
Date: 5/18/2016 6:12:00 PM
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LOL...he needs the prego pants with elastic
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/19/2016 1:30:00 AM
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ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/18/2016 9:08:00 PM
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I do not!!!
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Walter T. Ashe
Date: 5/18/2016 6:03:00 PM
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:-) :-) That's what happens trying to wear "skinny jeans!" :-) :-)
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2016 6:04:00 PM
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LOL Walter:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/18/2016 5:50:00 PM
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What I meant to say was that none of his food was wasted but rather waisted.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2016 5:53:00 PM
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ha ha ha clever play on words there Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 5/18/2016 5:42:00 PM
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ha, ha, ha. Excellent, Jan. All of his food apparently went to waist.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/18/2016 5:45:00 PM
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Most definitely Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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