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Poor Percy

Poor Percy acted like a schmuck 
I guess he was down on his luck
He looked quite a sight
His pants were too tight
He waddled around like a duck

18th May 2016

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2016

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May 28, 2016 at 11:54 PM

Be careful Jan, you might find the ducks are upset - Lindsay

May 29, 2016 at 5:57 PM

lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lenny Gazbowski

May 21, 2016 at 11:10 PM

haha :-) chuckles more !!!

May 22, 2016 at 4:29 PM

Thanks so much Lenny:-) hugs Jan xx

May 20, 2016 at 1:29 PM

Excellent, Jan; witty and with flowing meter. Hugs // paul

May 22, 2016 at 4:29 PM

Thanks so much Paul I am working hard to find good ones for the book:-) hugs Jan xx

May 20, 2016 at 10:46 AM

Hi Jan, Lol! You really are the limerick "Queen". Nice picture too. Well done- Alexis

May 20, 2016 at 12:30 PM

Thanks Alexis:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 19, 2016 at 9:04 PM

haha. love the picture you put with it.

May 20, 2016 at 12:29 PM

I had to tone done from the one I really wanted to post lol:-) hugs jan xx

May 19, 2016 at 4:02 PM

I could lend him my CORSET as it doesn't fit me anymore.

May 19, 2016 at 4:14 PM

lol Jean must be all that good food when you were on holiday:-) hugs Jan xx

Archontoula Alexandropoulou

May 19, 2016 at 3:10 PM

It's capital! really!

May 19, 2016 at 3:23 PM

Thanks:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

May 19, 2016 at 3:09 PM

Hilarious, I can picture Percy!thanks Jan

May 19, 2016 at 3:23 PM

Thanks Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

May 18, 2016 at 9:09 PM

LOL, another great limerick! Now I except nothing less! ( and from what I saw here, a lot more! ) LOL

May 19, 2016 at 1:31 AM

Progress for the book is slow atm Arthur hope my muse picks up:-) hugs Jan xx

May 18, 2016 at 6:12 PM

LOL...he needs the prego pants with elastic

May 19, 2016 at 1:30 AM

ha ha ha:-) hugs Jan xx

May 18, 2016 at 9:08 PM

I do not!!!

May 18, 2016 at 6:03 PM

:-) :-) That's what happens trying to wear "skinny jeans!" :-) :-)

May 18, 2016 at 6:04 PM

LOL Walter:-) hugs Jan xx

May 18, 2016 at 5:50 PM

What I meant to say was that none of his food was wasted but rather waisted.

May 18, 2016 at 5:53 PM

ha ha ha clever play on words there Paul:-) hugs Jan xx

May 18, 2016 at 5:42 PM

ha, ha, ha. Excellent, Jan. All of his food apparently went to waist.

May 18, 2016 at 5:45 PM

Most definitely Paul lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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