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Poor Man

We never thought she'd find the right man Find a more fickle bride if you can.. Poor man hasn't a chance She's in charge of romance He stepped into the fire from the pan Written in haste for the "Cousins Wedding" contest... my appologies...lol

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Francine Roberts

Date: 10/3/2012 12:03:00 AM

congrats on your win, I am really enjoying reading the winning entries tonight, they are all so great

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2012 2:29:00 PM

Barbara, Congratulations with your fantastic entry for Joann's "My Cousin's Wedding" cheers~ xox~ PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2012 2:52:00 PM

way to go, Barbara. I knew this would be on the list. Congrats to y ou.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 7:12:00 AM

What a super win for you. Congratulations Barbara. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 9/30/2012 11:37:00 AM

Congratulations my friend for being a winner!! i like your poem!! (^_^)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/30/2012 11:10:00 AM

Good giggle and big congrats Barbara xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/28/2012 4:51:00 PM

Cute one..That would be an interesting marriage..Her couldn't find the right man and he from the pan into the fire...Reads like an interesting winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/27/2012 10:51:00 PM

Even in haste it has come out pretty good. Liked it a lot.

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/27/2012 7:19:00 PM

This is a very funny write Barbara! I loved this awesome poem! You did excellent for the contest, should place high! Wonderful piece, Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2012 6:39:00 PM

hey this is GREAT. I love a good limerick for a contest like this one.