Pools

The sun blowtorches its way into the water, 
fragments, and the bottom is an aqua sky 
webbed by white-hot lightning. 

Here and there, legs hang like halved mannequins 
disappearing into a squiggly-bright ceiling, 
through which you can make out 
the slurred shape of a poolside palm tree. 

The deep, guttural grooon-grooon of
the water’s stomach growling is all you hear, 
dredging up a similar sound from your subconscious,
last heard while you were immersed, long ago, 
in another fluid world.  

The water suddenly internal-combusts 
in a tangle of arms and legs,  
flailing in a fizz of a million tiny bubbles,  
some kid having just somersaulted into the blue.

Soon, another’s face splashes down before you, 
slightly albino in the shining water,  
bug-eyed with silvered goggles
like a child alien from a waterless planet 
discovering buoyancy. 

Then you realize it’s your own kid, 
wobbling from side to side,
toothy, hair waving like smoke 
as he dog-paddles away. 

You come up for air, breaching the surface like a 
graceless dolphin, 
and clarity hits your ears, 
a momentarily soundless din. 

You can already feel your skin heating up
in the blast furnace above water, 
confusing because there are beads 
running down your face and neck, cold.  

You suck a lungful of air and push yourself under again, 

but not before catching a glimpse of your wife
drowse-browsing a magazine on her sun lounger,  

and the two umbrellas, 

the big one shading the miniature one 
stuck in the snowy slush of your pina colada.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 5/13/2019 2:53:00 PM
Hello Bernard Chan, Question: Is this a day dream? I am thinking you were day dreaming you were somewhere else. Hav a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/13/2019 4:49:00 PM
Hi Darlene, parts of this are based on real trips to different beach resorts with my family. The rest, I made up. So it's a combination of real experiences and a daydream. Thank you :)
Date: 5/8/2019 7:36:00 AM
A slow wonderful summer day. Nicely written.
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Bernard Chan
Date: 5/8/2019 9:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot, James.
Date: 4/7/2019 8:48:00 AM
Oh, awesome, transportive, fantastically original, thoroughly enjoyed, a fave! ;) xomo!
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Bernard Chan
Date: 4/7/2019 7:09:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen. You're an angel :)
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