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Pondering of a Puddle

Ponded and becalmed after the downpour, lying in shining stillness, I reflect an earthly existence; above me newly leafed limbs, and beyond, the wild beauty of motley skies in the afternoon’s brightening quietude. On the side of a country back road, I daydream. As leftover clouds drift in light and dark moods across my mirrored face, I ponder the possibilities of ‘what ifs’. What if life had taken me elsewhere - to a different time and place, filling another space, in another form and shape? What if I had fallen soft as a summer drizzle instead, dressing spider webs in misty strings of mini crystal beads.. or had filled a rusty-relic watering can, left behind ages ago beside an ivy-smothered stump.. or maybe had been wind-whipped with a vengeance into a swollen river rough and ready to ride the rapids.. What if, I had fallen as snow eons ago and now was found deep in an ice core in Antarctica.. how exotic! Straying cumulus find themselves captured in my imagination as well as in my liquid looking-glass oval, and my thoughts stray back to the soothing smoothness of my present reality. I know my time here, though sweet, is short-lived; and so I set my pondering aside and decide to seize upon the moment with contentment in my tranquil state of repose. placid puddle mulls lost in reflections of clouds - spring rains laid to rest Susan Ashley May 1, 2019 ~Third Place~ Contest: Happy Haibun Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 8/6/2019 2:24:00 AM
Congratulations, Susan on your well deserved win with this beautiful Haibun.
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Date: 8/10/2019 6:33:00 PM
Thank you, Subimal, for your heartwarming comments and kind congrats. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 8/2/2019 2:43:00 PM
What if indeed. Your pen flows with such sweet reflections Susan, it makes us also stop and take time for a moment to on life.
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Date: 8/2/2019 10:40:00 PM
I relish your lovely presence here, Jean. Your beautiful comments are joyfully received. Warmest wishes always my inspiring friend.. ~Susan
Date: 8/2/2019 6:28:00 AM
What if, there were no Susan Ashley. The world would be missing a beautiful person/poet and I would be very sad. Awesome write my dear friend. Congratulations on your win. Warmest Wishes Always. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 8/2/2019 10:37:00 PM
Aw, your charm never ceases to amaze or uplift me, Charlieku. Thank you for your beautiful comments that touch my heart, dear friend. I relish your precious friendship and your kind congrats. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 6/11/2019 9:48:00 AM
Hello Susan, wow! This poem is beautiful. You made me feel like I was there. Have a nice day my friend. Warmth wishes: Darlene
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Date: 6/11/2019 6:18:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Your precious comments are uplifting and means so much to me. Thank you for sharing your wonderful heart and kindness with me, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/10/2019 3:59:00 PM
Your profound and inspiring poetry resonates with my soul.. your thoughts twinkle my mind.. your expressive words are soothing and fill the heart with sweet joy.. always a great pleasure in the company of your art dearest Susan.. definitely a FAV. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
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Date: 5/13/2019 10:16:00 PM
Your refined spirit always finds the heart in my words and the soul in my poems. It brings me immense joy to know that my words touch your being in such a meaningful way. I am deeply moved by your generous comments, you inspire me to reach ever higher, dearest Besma. Thank you for your shining friendship, your glowing words and for the fav. With love.. ~Susan
Date: 5/10/2019 3:50:00 PM
Not any soul ponders over the possibilities of moments in other times.. winging their way to other worlds.. tasting beauties of different flair.. Only a poetess whose poetic artistry, fine art and a beautiful mind grant her the ultimate right to ascend to higher levels of imagination and quench not only her thirst but also that of her avid reader! Such a beautiful soul wouldn't allow her Self to get "lost in reflections".. as you are, soul sister filled with grace and contentment..
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Date: 5/13/2019 10:07:00 PM
Dearest Besma, your comments are so wonderfully elegant and eloquent. I'm humbled and honored by the beauty of your words gracing my poem. I truly and deeply appreciate you, my avid reader. Thank you for sharing the magic of your sentiments with me, as they fill my heart with elation. With utmost delight I bask in the gracious light that illuminates my page when you visit, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes, love and hugs to you always, my dear sister.. ~Susan
Date: 5/8/2019 6:47:00 AM
An ocean pales in comparison, magnificently said, Aloha William...
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Date: 5/9/2019 6:20:00 PM
I am humbled and honored by your lovely comments, William. Your shining comment is received with the utmost joy. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this piece. Thank you and Aloha, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/7/2019 8:19:00 AM
Susan, your puddle is a large wave of personification!
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Date: 5/7/2019 6:12:00 PM
It is truly a joy to see you here, Ralph. Thank you for your gracious visit and precious comments. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/5/2019 1:06:00 PM
Beautiful personification and delightful musing, Susan. Puddles, especially those which form in rocky terrains always draw my attention, and like you I also find them inspiring. The last ku lines are impactful and provide a fitting ending, my friend. ~ Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/7/2019 6:10:00 PM
It seems like both our muses are inspired by water, whether it’s as grand as the ocean or as humble as a puddle. It is always such a joy when you share your precious thoughts with me, Paul. Thank you for your beautiful comments and inspiring friendship. Warmest wishes and hugs always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/2/2019 4:14:00 PM
My dear friend the enormity and expansive depths you explore with this awesome and mind staggering piece stir this old poet's heart, soul and mind to admire even more your ability to compose true, fine and top-class poetry! A fav.. and a true gem...
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Date: 5/3/2019 9:08:00 PM
My dear friend, it is always such a treasured gift to receive your heartwarming, uplifting comments and a fav. Thank you, Robert, for sharing your precious thoughts with me and adding value to my poem with the shine of your presence. I'm so very pleased that you enjoyed this piece. Warmest wishes always, my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
Date: 5/2/2019 10:46:00 AM
Such grave ruminations stirred by a simple, innocent puddle of water. Very nicely written, Susan.
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:41:00 PM
Indeed, Lawrence.. It all started with a walk outside after a soaking rain and seeing the large puddles left in the storm's wake.. Sometimes the simplest things sow seeds in the imagination and stir the heart. It is a honor to receive your wonderful comments, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/2/2019 9:04:00 AM
A puddle which is turning out to be a tsunami, of a poetic deluge...hey! missy sissy...what up girl?...love ya...bro bro...{*J*}
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:32:00 PM
Hey my soul bro! It's always a great day when you grace my page with your light and my face with a smile. My apologies for being more MIA than present here at PS, life has a way of getting in the way of poetic passion sometimes. Hopefully the Unicorns are still kicking up their heels :) I'll be back in the East wing soon.. Thank you for your awesomeness, bro bro. Warmest wishes and love.. ~ sane sissy
Date: 5/2/2019 3:15:00 AM
You have honoured the humble puddle Susan, a great write. Tom
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:24:00 PM
I am humbled and honored by your lovely comments, Tom. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this piece. Thank you, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 5/1/2019 10:32:00 PM
Oh to have such thoughts. To actually have them. To really think them! Mind-boggling, Susan! ~ gw in chic AWE go!
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Date: 5/3/2019 8:22:00 PM
My dear Gershon, your presence is a ray of sunshine, despite our gloomy spring weather. Your wonderful comment is received with the utmost joy. I hope the sun is shining on you in chic AWE go, my inspiring friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

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