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Pondering in Pastures

Pretty pink and purple poppies
 perfume peaceful pastures and
 prance into picturesque poses.
 Proud patterns in pale light 
paint playful pictures
 in dust particles like
 pinpricks of precise punctuation. 
Promises are preached, pondered, prayed for 
and proven in this patient pastime.
 Pushed, pulled, put and pardoned
 by a precious and pure performance
 in her powerful presence...
preserving this preceived poetry.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 6/10/2024 9:46:00 AM

Beautifully crafted with a plethora of P words. Not easy to write such poems and retain the main subject but you did a nice job Crystol.

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/10/2024 4:25:00 PM

Oh dear, I hope so... It's somewhat tongue in cheek, in a way, and began as a fun experiment ha! Although I have to agree, the subject that arose from the plethora of Ps ;), ended up being better than I thought it could. Ty for your comment! Xo

Daisy Meadows

Date: 6/10/2024 8:41:00 AM

Beautiful. A lovely poem.

Crystol Woods
Date: 6/10/2024 4:21:00 PM

Tysm!