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Ponder Poetry Contest, Sponsor- Constance La France. Date written: 05/24/2026

Ponder


                  you're a snake of recollection, 
                 once in a blue moon slithering 
               into this head that thinks for me.
              you moved out of state eons ago, 
        leaving behind memories that still burn
                       bone-deep in my mind.

               suddenly back, the ghost of you...
   comfortably sink into the velvet sofa, old friend,
            yes, put your feet up on the ottoman. 
            i'm afraid i have nothing to offer you,
               just as much as you can't answer 
   a myriad of questions that continually haunt me. 

      will i still easily recognize your mug? yes? no?
 have you made an honest woman out of someone?  
  i wonder, have you conquered your fear of clowns? 
                       oh, and do you still laugh... 
               with your head tilted up to the sky?
              i bet you still do; you can't help that.

             the passage of time is a drag, ain't it?
    would our friendship have aged to the present 
         had destiny not interrupted? who knows?
                     sometimes, i sit and ponder 
                   a wealth of whatifs, wondering...
                       if you do just as much, too.
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La France Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 6:41 AM
Edward, beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win in my Ponder Contest ~
Ibeh Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 7:54 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations, feedback, and my placement, dear Constance:-) Most obliged.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 9:16 AM
I enjoyed reading. Your "Ponder" is a wonderful read/write. "Good Luck" I also did this fun contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Ibeh Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 3:10 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and lovely visit, Paula:-)
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