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Pond Life: Lillypads And Frogs

Pond Life: Lillypads and Frogs lotus flower blooms showa koi search old pond pollywogs scatter pulsing dragonfly above shadowed frog on pad unbridled tongue fast ~by deborah burch© 4/27/2012

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Date: 5/22/2012 8:48:00 PM
yours is one of the few that reads like real haiku. wonderful and congrats (mine was not haiku but it was fun doing it like a story)
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Date: 5/22/2012 8:48:00 PM
Great avatar you have. So fun looking
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Lilly-pads and Frogs" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 12:26:00 AM
Deborah,, congrats with your wonderful froggy win.. enjoyed reading your poem tonight~xox~PD
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Date: 5/20/2012 6:45:00 AM
Your Haiku's catching... like your frog's tongue... Congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/20/2012 3:58:00 AM
Cap'n Deb congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 5/20/2012 2:51:00 AM
D.B,, Congratulations;-) & Thanks for supporting my contest~ :-)
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Date: 4/28/2012 9:13:00 PM
Hi Debs, I had to scamper over here to your pond and see what is a brewing....that first one is a true beauty with the oriental fish..I am easily woo'ed in the second with the pulsing dragonfly and shadows casted on frog...oh, I know this one is good...it shines, girl..Thanks for laughing with me earlier...you are a fine one to talk...you are JUST as silly as me and I thoroughly enjoy it! I am off to search for another gem of yours poetess Burch. :) Gwendolen
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Date: 4/27/2012 1:44:00 PM
Nice Haiku here Deb....good luck in the contest
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/27/2012 5:15:00 PM
widow spider here ;) lol... thank you Joseph best wishes to you as well...have a great weekend...hugs, love deb
Date: 4/27/2012 12:24:00 PM
Very clever!! I actually didn't want it to end. I love the imagery here. "unbriddled tongue fast." smiles...Pace
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/27/2012 5:12:00 PM
awww, thank you doll...big huggsss :) much love debs
Date: 4/27/2012 12:04:00 PM
Super....I like this Deborah. :) - Wish you luck in contest, hope for a wim to you. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/27/2012 5:10:00 PM
:) thank you Anne Lise...Have a fab weekend...big hugs sweetie,love deb
Date: 4/27/2012 11:29:00 AM
Love this....I can see it acting out !!! Well done and best of luck in the contest !!
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/27/2012 12:00:00 PM
:) thank you so much my friend