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Pond Life: Lillypads and Frogs

Pond Life: Lillypads and Frogs lotus flower blooms showa koi search old pond pollywogs scatter pulsing dragonfly above shadowed frog on pad unbridled tongue fast ~by deborah burch© 4/27/2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2012 8:48:00 PM

yours is one of the few that reads like real haiku. wonderful and congrats (mine was not haiku but it was fun doing it like a story)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2012 8:48:00 PM

Great avatar you have. So fun looking

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Lilly-pads and Frogs" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/21/2012 12:26:00 AM

Deborah,, congrats with your wonderful froggy win.. enjoyed reading your poem tonight~xox~PD

Terry O'Leary

Date: 5/20/2012 6:45:00 AM

Your Haiku's catching... like your frog's tongue... Congrats... Terry

David Williams

Date: 5/20/2012 3:58:00 AM

Cap'n Deb congrats on your great win..David

Skat A

Date: 5/20/2012 2:51:00 AM

D.B,, Congratulations;-) & Thanks for supporting my contest~ :-)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/28/2012 9:13:00 PM

Hi Debs, I had to scamper over here to your pond and see what is a brewing....that first one is a true beauty with the oriental fish..I am easily woo'ed in the second with the pulsing dragonfly and shadows casted on frog...oh, I know this one is good...it shines, girl..Thanks for laughing with me earlier...you are a fine one to talk...you are JUST as silly as me and I thoroughly enjoy it! I am off to search for another gem of yours poetess Burch. :) Gwendolen